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Reply With QuoteOhhh!!! This such like a.................catchy It's so cool thats all. It just reminds me of my whole family!!!!! Thats why I love it! Hope to see more!
I saw myself the other day,
it wasn't what I expected.
The walls of the world fell apart
it was exactly what I expected.
Time was caving in
and I sat still waiting for
my words to save me.
I walked down the street
reading the words on everyone's
sleeve.
What seemed so beautiful
wasn't really there. It finally
dropped.
I looked into the sky as it
rained, and wore a smile
on my face that day.
Only you compare.
Dear Dinah...
Ohhh!!! This such like a.................catchy It's so cool thats all. It just reminds me of my whole family!!!!! Thats why I love it! Hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Wow. At first it seemed a little repitive but I get it now. The view point is dark but thought provoking. Makes the world seem like a very horrible place to live in. But the poem was very good. It's soul stirring.
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
It's really great sweet heart, I like this one a lot. However, you really should try a different style of writing from time to time :P.
So is it about getting older or is it you had a good look at what you have become and everyting is falling around you and the people that you tought were differnt now you see them for who they are. well what ever its about its verry good and I liked it. I hope to see more and you have a good way of expression
Thank you, and it's pretty much about all those things, or rather just realization. I will be sure to write more ^-^
Dear Dinah...
very,...deep...I like this poem....it makes you think. I look forward to youre next one......
Thank you very much ^-^ I actually have another poem posted right now if you want to go look at it.
Dear Dinah...
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