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    Seek no Comfort

    Seek no comfort in my silence.

    The sounds of nothing, should frighten you. Actions make no noise.


    Seek no comfort in your rage.

    You've used all your strength to open a mouth which will swallow you.


    Do not find yourself so satisfied.

    You've only been made to belive its over, its really just begun.


    Seek no comfort in your laughter.

    It is just a quick way to tears. Smoke your poison, lift your spirit before it breaks.


    Seek no comfort in your wit.

    You never had the upper hand. You should have learned this by now.


    Seek no comfort in protecting

    It is who you're allowing to hurt that will understand one day... And hate you.

    Your only savior now... will be humility.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Seek no Comfort

    sheesh @.@ some anger thrusted and injected in a balloon (poem) slowly going big,...
    i wonder when will it pop though... @.@ nicely done... good job,...

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    Wow.. so true... so true... I like this a lot. You have done a great job with this. and please write some more^^ I would like to see some more of your masterpieces.. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Seek no Comfort

    Thank you both... I really appreciate the feedback.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Seek no Comfort

    I will seek no comfort if I don't tell you that this poem is deeply harsh, but gently true... The truth hurts, but will always set you free & that is what this poem did... I remembered a time where... Never mind just know you brought back memories & I love it when writing can do that or either capture feelings in which you did both... Keep up the good work... Peach the artist lol ^_^...

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