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    "Seek not my heart"

    Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
    Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

    Below the branches,
    Here about.

    Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
    Side glistening rivers,
    sparkling streams,
    Do not you hear my woeful screams?

    Upon the meadows,
    Touched with dew,
    Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
    Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
    Do not you feel my jagged scars?

    Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
    For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

    It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
    Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
    It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
    A symbol of my silent pain.

    It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
    Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
    It's lost among the stars this night,
    Too far to ease my quiet fright.

    No gentle winds,
    Seek not my heart,
    For simply ...
    It has torn apart.

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    Re: "Seek not my heart"

    This is a great poem.....
    You wrote it in such a way that it seems very mysterious and magical almost...in my opinion......and the rhythm style is unique too......
    Overall.....this is a very good poem.....
    Very nicely done!!!!!
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    Re: "Seek not my heart"

    Rearranging the lines of someone else's poem does not make this your own original work. This poem is credited to Kit McCallum, and is posted on several sites, including one on which she is an admin.

    http://www.geocities.com/kwmccallum/...t%20My%20Heart
    Seek Not My Heart - pipTalk Forums

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