Seizure

-=Broken^Halo=- · Aug 19, 2006, 01:18 PM

Ok.. last post for the day unless anyone has no objections.. (Ive a books worth of poetry) but yeah..this one was fun to write.. thought I'd write about something a bit "dark" with a contrast of rythm..

Seizure.

Clickity pop the thoughts run hot,
A snap and clap the answers bought,
Time to rhyme lips chime right,
A spec of sparkle, eyes hide night,

A trip, a shove, legs spring back,
Twist of the wrist, arms relax,
nod and bob, head out of wack,
Jolt and bolt, neck to the right.

Flutter and utter open nonsense,
Shudder and hover as you dance.
fight and bite with broken teeth,
shake and wake the open peace.

Chomp and gulp the only taste,
gurgle and hurl from the face,
Gasp with grasps for relief,
Stay and prey your belief.

*fayt lingod* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:20 PM

not sure what that was about but the rhyme scheme was cool

-=Broken^Halo=- · Aug 19, 2006, 01:21 PM

its about having a seizure :P.. hence the title ^.^

*fayt lingod* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:22 PM

oh, now it makes much more sense. makes it even better

-=Broken^Halo=- · Aug 19, 2006, 01:23 PM

He he.. thanks for the compliments ^.^

*Baal* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:39 PM

3 in a row and there all darky with a lots of ritmo..

-=Broken^Halo=- · Aug 19, 2006, 01:42 PM

He he.. Well.. I have one Light poem.. but yeah.. I'll post it later.. I don't want to annoy any admin people with continous posting.

*Baal* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:47 PM

i think the challene is post all u can
but yeah i think is better if u wait a little longer
ill wait for ur poem mon!

*princesslady* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:48 PM

wow. that was ... something. but good

*Baal* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:49 PM

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Originally Posted by princesslady

wow. that was ... something. but good

what kind of poem u like love 1's?

*princesslady* · Aug 19, 2006, 01:52 PM

i like poems that dont have to do with seizures but this is good. and o i like other poems also ball. why you ask? you got a problem with me likeing love poems?

Aug 19, 2006, 01:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
-=Broken^Halo=- Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Seizure Ok.. last post for the day unless anyone has no objections.. (Ive a books worth of poetry) but yeah..this one was fun to write.. thought I'd write about something a bit "dark" with a contrast of rythm.. Seizure. Clickity pop the thoughts run hot, A snap and clap the answers bought, Time to rhyme lips chime right, A spec of sparkle, eyes hide night, A trip, a shove, legs spring back, Twist of the wrist, arms relax, nod and bob, head out of wack, Jolt and bolt, neck to the right. Flutter and utter open nonsense, Shudder and hover as you dance. fight and bite with broken teeth, shake and wake the open peace. Chomp and gulp the only taste, gurgle and hurl from the face, Gasp with grasps for relief, Stay and prey your belief. __________________ Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu\|23
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fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,505 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,474	Re: Seizure not sure what that was about but the rhyme scheme was cool __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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-=Broken^Halo=- Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Seizure its about having a seizure :P.. hence the title ^.^ __________________ Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu\|23
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fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,505 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,474	Re: Seizure oh, now it makes much more sense. makes it even better __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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-=Broken^Halo=- Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Seizure He he.. thanks for the compliments ^.^ __________________ Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu\|23
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Aug 19, 2006, 01:39 PM	#6 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	Re: Seizure 3 in a row and there all darky with a lots of ritmo.. __________________ perdoname michelle!
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Aug 19, 2006, 01:42 PM	#7 (permalink)
-=Broken^Halo=- Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Seizure He he.. Well.. I have one Light poem.. but yeah.. I'll post it later.. I don't want to annoy any admin people with continous posting. __________________ Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu\|23
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Aug 19, 2006, 01:47 PM	#8 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	Re: Seizure i think the challene is post all u can but yeah i think is better if u wait a little longer ill wait for ur poem mon! __________________ perdoname michelle!
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princesslady Kyle's mom is a bytch Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In solitude Posts: 1,450 Thanks: 6 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 7,378	Re: Seizure wow. that was ... something. but good __________________ *Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen*
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princesslady Kyle's mom is a bytch Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In solitude Posts: 1,450 Thanks: 6 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 7,378	Re: Seizure i like poems that dont have to do with seizures but this is good. and o i like other poems also ball. why you ask? you got a problem with me likeing love poems? __________________ *Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen*
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