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    Seizure

    Ok.. last post for the day unless anyone has no objections.. (Ive a books worth of poetry) but yeah..this one was fun to write.. thought I'd write about something a bit "dark" with a contrast of rythm..


    Seizure.

    Clickity pop the thoughts run hot,
    A snap and clap the answers bought,
    Time to rhyme lips chime right,
    A spec of sparkle, eyes hide night,

    A trip, a shove, legs spring back,
    Twist of the wrist, arms relax,
    nod and bob, head out of wack,
    Jolt and bolt, neck to the right.

    Flutter and utter open nonsense,
    Shudder and hover as you dance.
    fight and bite with broken teeth,
    shake and wake the open peace.

    Chomp and gulp the only taste,
    gurgle and hurl from the face,
    Gasp with grasps for relief,
    Stay and prey your belief.
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    Re: Seizure

    not sure what that was about but the rhyme scheme was cool

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: Seizure

    its about having a seizure :P.. hence the title ^.^
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    Re: Seizure

    oh, now it makes much more sense. makes it even better

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    He he.. thanks for the compliments ^.^
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    Re: Seizure

    3 in a row and there all darky with a lots of ritmo..



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Seizure

    He he.. Well.. I have one Light poem.. but yeah.. I'll post it later.. I don't want to annoy any admin people with continous posting.
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    Re: Seizure

    i think the challene is post all u can
    but yeah i think is better if u wait a little longer
    ill wait for ur poem mon!



    perdoname michelle!

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