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    Self Medicated

    My sincerity content is 100 proof.
    Quick as alcohol through bloodstreams,
    I deliver the truth.
    But, consuming too much...
    ...will make you drunk with delusion.
    Wrapped up in the weeds...
    ..Like a Philly of confusion.
    Ignorance is bliss.
    And the Swisher is sweet.
    Taking shots of this reality,
    Will knock you off your feet.
    Does knowledge go down smooth?
    Or, are you too sticky icky?
    Will you disappear like smoke.
    Or wake up in the mornin', sickly?
    I'll drink you under the table...
    ... I got the truth in my glass.
    But you keep lightin' up the bullsh!t
    So I puff, puff, pass.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Self Medicated

    I read this this morning. And I really dig it. As a participator in one of the themes I found it clever and well written. Not to mention that the actual message of the poem was lovely aswell. I dug it.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Self Medicated

    This is interesting. You made great use of rhyme and expressed the point in a fairly short poem, and I like the short one.

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    Re: Self Medicated

    I don't partake in recrational use of drugs or alchohol but that was a smooth write, nice.

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