A Series of Haiku

*atomik_sprout* · Mar 28, 2007, 11:36 AM

Walking in darkness.
Attacks come out of left field.
I hate this city.
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Boondock samurai.
Why must you endure such pain?
It's time to find peace.
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Two hundred pound gold.
Three people ran off with it.
No security.

(Based off a news article I read about three masked men who ran off with a 200 lb. gold bar/nugget, worth over $2 million, from a Japanese musem. They had no protective case or sensors surronding it, because curators claim that "the gold wanted people to touch it." Well they touched it all right. Touched it right out of the building. If you want to read about it, go to The top news headlines on current events from Yahoo! News)
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Sitting at my job.
No implausibles to fix.
Must post on AO.

(an implausible is an error that causes the system to bill for the wrong amount of gas)
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That is it for me.
I'll write more haiku later.
Tell me if you like. ^_^

Forgotten soul · Mar 28, 2007, 11:39 AM

hey not bad for haiku you did good ^_^ I like it.
can I add you to my network?

!The White Wolf · Mar 28, 2007, 01:11 PM

Lol, Sprout. Love them. My favorites are the first two. Nice work.

*Peach_follows* · Mar 28, 2007, 03:19 PM

I think writing haiku is one of the best writing exercizes EVER! They're simple, but it takes a creative mind to make them come together cleverly, and also make them interesting... You really seem to have a knack for it.

Ofcourse, Id LOVE to see you write something with a little more FEELING. Something to give your readers an indication of your stance in life.

Ya'know, like I do...

evil_neko_youkai · Mar 30, 2007, 11:35 AM

lol, i really like them alot, i cant wait to see more of your haiku

Mar 28, 2007, 11:36 AM	#1 (permalink)
atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	A Series of Haiku Walking in darkness. Attacks come out of left field. I hate this city. ---------------------------------- Boondock samurai. Why must you endure such pain? It's time to find peace. ---------------------------------- Two hundred pound gold. Three people ran off with it. No security. (Based off a news article I read about three masked men who ran off with a 200 lb. gold bar/nugget, worth over $2 million, from a Japanese musem. They had no protective case or sensors surronding it, because curators claim that "the gold wanted people to touch it." Well they touched it all right. Touched it right out of the building. If you want to read about it, go to The top news headlines on current events from Yahoo! News) ------------------------------------- Sitting at my job. No implausibles to fix. Must post on AO. (an implausible is an error that causes the system to bill for the wrong amount of gas) --------------------------------------- That is it for me. I'll write more haiku later. Tell me if you like. ^_^ __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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Mar 28, 2007, 11:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
Forgotten soul Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 67 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 143	Re: A Series of Haiku hey not bad for haiku you did good ^_^ I like it. can I add you to my network? __________________
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Mar 28, 2007, 01:11 PM	#3 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	Re: A Series of Haiku Lol, Sprout. Love them. My favorites are the first two. Nice work.
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Mar 28, 2007, 03:19 PM	#4 (permalink)
Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,036 Thanks: 42 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 2,937	Re: A Series of Haiku I think writing haiku is one of the best writing exercizes EVER! They're simple, but it takes a creative mind to make them come together cleverly, and also make them interesting... You really seem to have a knack for it. Ofcourse, Id LOVE to see you write something with a little more FEELING. Something to give your readers an indication of your stance in life. Ya'know, like I do... __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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evil_neko_youkai Newbie Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: somewhere making the lives of others hell Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,982	Re: A Series of Haiku lol, i really like them alot, i cant wait to see more of your haiku __________________
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