Thread: Seven deadly sins

I like it... The rhyme is good, and I like that you matched the sins well with things that go with it to do so. It's not my favorite of yours, but it's still good. Keep them coming!!! I can't wait to read more!

It was a good poem. Your rhyming was very good. I look forward to reading more.

Originally Posted by flaminghate

I am sloth, see me yawn deep,
Then leave me be, so I can sleep.


I am greed, I want and I want,
See all the stuff that I can flaunt.

I am lust, see my desire,
The heat I feel sets me on fire.

I am pride; I am stronger than you,
Wiser more daring and prettier too.

I am envy; I want all you've got,
Everyone has everything that I have not.

I am gluttony, I eat and I eat,
Chocolate, fruit and all kinds of meat.

I am Wrath, and I feed off war,
The blood and the guts, is what I adore.

We are the sins, we total at seven,
We are the sins that keep you from heaven.

Good poem, but i dont like it. Those are basic human characteristics, theres no running from it. You cant tell some one to not be them selves..

This poem is really good and interesting. I liked the rhyming pattern. You have a way of words. The poem seemed to be simple, yet it is worth reading. keep up the good job. The description for each deadly sins matched.

I like this one alot! Very good word play, excellent rhyming. This one would have to be one of my favs.