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    Shadow of Me

    A black reflection of me is cast
    Every time light hits me
    A shadowy figure appears
    A twin, beneath me

    You mimic my every move
    An echo of my life

    I find both good and bad in you
    You are my enemy and my friend
    Your company helps me when I'm down
    A friend who is always by my side

    Alas!
    Every time I glance at you
    You remind me of my guilt
    The sins I've commited
    And the monster that haunts me in my sleep

    Somehow, dear shadow
    You help reflect who I am
    Who I really am, deep inside my heart
    And with that, I thank you.

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    Re: Shadow of Me

    Wow Elie it is flawless! Keep up the good wprk ^.^ Show us nore of your masterpieces!!

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    Re: Shadow of Me

    Seems thought out quite well, doesn't rhyme, but doesn't need to as long as its nice to read as it is in this case. I hope to see more too, as I'm probably be inspired by the happenings in AO and my surroundings for my new thread I started in this section of fanfic and poems.

    Hope to meet you soon enough through PM or in a good heart fillled thread XD
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    Re: Shadow of Me

    Dam, ur poems are getting good. Look forward to reading more.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Shadow of Me

    Haha. I like, and Since I'm in class. I show everyone, and they like too.
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    Re: Shadow of Me

    A great poem, Elie. Keep up the AWESOME work. I love it. It has a beautiful meaning. It remind of a poem that I adored so much: Eclipsed Truth-Written by my favorite poet.

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    Re: Shadow of Me

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    Dam, ur poems are getting good. Look forward to reading more.
    no kidding, man! this is so freakin awesome!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kakashi_sensei
    no kidding, man! this is so freakin awesome!
    I agree and I add, you should never stop writing

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