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    Re: Shadow of Me

    i have to admit but u got these descriptive emotional poems nailed. they just keep on getting better and better. i can only say how great so many times. but it seems that i don't know any words to reflect the true brilliance in ur poems.

    anyway keep up the great work, ur poems are always a pleasure to read.

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    Re: Shadow of Me

    how about reading one of my poems

    It kills to feel


    I hit I'm fine, I cut I feel, I die I'm free
    The need to feel is killing me
    The blood flows out along with pain
    So I cut, cut and cut again


    Life it hurts, it ****s you up
    Pains a release, ah a hot fag butt
    There's one way out I have found
    The noose the knife around the throat no noise no sound


    Is there a life after death?
    If you go on living I curse thee god, don't jest
    I hope there isn't anymore for me
    So when I die, I will be free


    But I am living and I must go on
    My friends would be saddened to see me gone
    So for my friends, for the moment I'll stay
    But when there gone to death I'll lay
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