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    Shady peccadillo.

    Humans; so futile aren’t they…
    Not knowing what they do,
    Or what their actions will cause,
    They just destroy.

    Sure there are some good people or two
    Who changed the world at times
    But we of the same race ignored their teachings and values,
    And kept on tearing apart our only home in hope for survival.

    What good have we done to our Earth?
    What have we done to protect her?
    Have we ever thought what our selfishness has completed?
    But most of all have we ever done good to our own neighbors…?

    Open your eyes-
    Even in this world where good humans reside,
    Under the thick fog of bogus lies sadness.
    Crimes. Horrors. Sins.
    Rape. Murder. Lies.

    Corruption; every possible peccadillo you can think of.
    Is this what humans are created for?
    Or have we chosen our own fate
    Where only revulsion preside.

    We who call ourselves superior,
    Are no less successful than our own primate ancestors,
    We make, destroy, use, terrify
    Power, money, greed, lust
    That’s all there is left in this world we’re going to destroy.

    For power we use people, kill and destroy,
    For money people grab on to anything,
    To satisfy our needs we resume to destruction.
    And something more dreadful – lust,
    Which shatters innocent lives.

    We still have the time,
    Improve while we still can,
    If you don’t understand this, open your mind you freaking idiots
    No one is going to clear this fog but yourselves!

    -Based on real world.-

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    all of that is true
    so deep
    i like it ^_^
    very nice well done


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    snaps for rushil!!!!!!
    i like it. it speaks the truth about the world

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    Its sad because its true. Everyone is so ignorant of their actions.

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    I really loved this poem. It was almost as if I could hear the author recite the poem. Great job.
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    Cool poem. The world can be a cruel place but we live here and try to make the best out of it. Anyways keep it up
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    ::bows and claps hands::
    there is always time to improve and repent for sins we've
    caused and poem is really mindblowing!
    great job!
    Emotions tend to lose their strength when put in words, So I prefer to speak only what is absolutely necessary..

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    Re: Shady peccadillo.

    great job Rave_Grip.
    by the way i'm also agree with you. i wan't no more sadness on this earth.

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