Shady peccadillo.

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 13, 2006, 07:46 AM

Humans; so futile aren’t they…
Not knowing what they do,
Or what their actions will cause,
They just destroy.

Sure there are some good people or two
Who changed the world at times
But we of the same race ignored their teachings and values,
And kept on tearing apart our only home in hope for survival.

What good have we done to our Earth?
What have we done to protect her?
Have we ever thought what our selfishness has completed?
But most of all have we ever done good to our own neighbors…?

Open your eyes-
Even in this world where good humans reside,
Under the thick fog of bogus lies sadness.
Crimes. Horrors. Sins.
Rape. Murder. Lies.

Corruption; every possible peccadillo you can think of.
Is this what humans are created for?
Or have we chosen our own fate
Where only revulsion preside.

We who call ourselves superior,
Are no less successful than our own primate ancestors,
We make, destroy, use, terrify
Power, money, greed, lust
That’s all there is left in this world we’re going to destroy.

For power we use people, kill and destroy,
For money people grab on to anything,
To satisfy our needs we resume to destruction.
And something more dreadful – lust,
Which shatters innocent lives.

We still have the time,
Improve while we still can,
If you don’t understand this, open your mind you freaking idiots
No one is going to clear this fog but yourselves!

-Based on real world.-

royal cutie pain · Oct 13, 2006, 08:05 AM

all of that is true
so deep
i like it ^_^
very nice well done

*princesslady* · Oct 13, 2006, 08:13 PM

snaps for rushil!!!!!!
i like it. it speaks the truth about the world

MistressMorgan · Oct 13, 2006, 08:19 PM

Its sad because its true. Everyone is so ignorant of their actions.

*Kasai* · Oct 14, 2006, 08:49 AM

I really loved this poem. It was almost as if I could hear the author recite the poem. Great job.

HieisLove · Oct 14, 2006, 01:35 PM

Cool poem. The world can be a cruel place but we live here and try to make the best out of it. Anyways keep it up

Kaijudozero · Oct 14, 2006, 01:39 PM

::bows and claps hands::
there is always time to improve and repent for sins we've
caused and poem is really mindblowing!
great job!

baikuza · Oct 14, 2006, 08:14 PM

great job Rave_Grip.
by the way i'm also agree with you. i wan't no more sadness on this earth.

*ketaro* · Oct 15, 2006, 07:38 AM

Great poem rave grip, keep it up.

*Mr. K* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:22 AM

^_^ Rave I love it~ IT makes tons of sence. And will suited poem for reality~ ^_^

Oct 13, 2006, 07:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,832	Shady peccadillo. Humans; so futile aren’t they… Not knowing what they do, Or what their actions will cause, They just destroy. Sure there are some good people or two Who changed the world at times But we of the same race ignored their teachings and values, And kept on tearing apart our only home in hope for survival. What good have we done to our Earth? What have we done to protect her? Have we ever thought what our selfishness has completed? But most of all have we ever done good to our own neighbors…? Open your eyes- Even in this world where good humans reside, Under the thick fog of bogus lies sadness. Crimes. Horrors. Sins. Rape. Murder. Lies. Corruption; every possible peccadillo you can think of. Is this what humans are created for? Or have we chosen our own fate Where only revulsion preside. We who call ourselves superior, Are no less successful than our own primate ancestors, We make, destroy, use, terrify Power, money, greed, lust That’s all there is left in this world we’re going to destroy. For power we use people, kill and destroy, For money people grab on to anything, To satisfy our needs we resume to destruction. And something more dreadful – lust, Which shatters innocent lives. We still have the time, Improve while we still can, If you don’t understand this, open your mind you freaking idiots No one is going to clear this fog but yourselves! -Based on real world.- __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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Oct 13, 2006, 08:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
royal cutie pain Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2006 Location: somewhere that is special and nice, Washington Posts: 229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 1,484	all of that is true so deep i like it ^_^ very nice well done __________________
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princesslady He loves me not Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in a castle up north Posts: 1,421 Thanks: 5 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 5,374	snaps for rushil!!!!!! i like it. it speaks the truth about the world __________________
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MistressMorgan Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Im not sure but someone get me out of here! Posts: 194 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 293	Its sad because its true. Everyone is so ignorant of their actions.
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	I really loved this poem. It was almost as if I could hear the author recite the poem. Great job. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Oct 14, 2006, 01:35 PM	#6 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,048	Cool poem. The world can be a cruel place but we live here and try to make the best out of it. Anyways keep it up __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Oct 14, 2006, 01:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
Kaijudozero Newbie Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: A place surrounded by demons Posts: 76 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 129	::bows and claps hands:: there is always time to improve and repent for sins we've caused and poem is really mindblowing! great job! __________________ When all else fails.....RUN!!!!!!! Thanx sasurai hell
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baikuza Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: should i? Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Shady peccadillo. great job Rave_Grip. by the way i'm also agree with you. i wan't no more sadness on this earth. __________________ .: Gallery :. .: My Live Space :.
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ketaro kitty Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,221 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,188	Re: Shady peccadillo. Great poem rave grip, keep it up.
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,203	Re: Shady peccadillo. ^_^ Rave I love it~ IT makes tons of sence. And will suited poem for reality~ ^_^
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