Very nice poem kinda dark but thats what makes it good, hope to read more.
Shattered
Standing in the rain as water drips down my face
I look down and see my shattered reflection in a puddle
Thinking of a passionate love that once burned hot
Being put out by your attitude like a freezing wind
Thoughts of trying to regain that love no longer alive
Watching my heart and emotions being buried six feet under
A lifeless body stands there watching as the dirt piles up
No tears able to flow like a river dammed up by stone
I held you in my arms and heard you say that you loved me
But yet I see you walking holding hands with another
Walking down a red carpet that is my heart that once beat
Forever my soul shall feel an eternal hell that will never end
Then when he breaks your heart you come to me to cry
Asking me to love you once again but there is nothing left
Darkness has already set in and love has become hatred
You look into my eye and see the fires of hell burning
You realize the pain and anguish you have caused me
Now you’re holding Satan who begins to laugh in your face
The pain that once rained down on me begins to fall on you
Now you look at the puddle of your tears shattered by love
I gotta thank my Bro HolderofTheDarkChalice and Shinigam's_Angel for being the awesome friends they are!
Last edited by BlueFox1; Nov 06, 2006 at 10:16 AM.
Very nice poem kinda dark but thats what makes it good, hope to read more.
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dark and cynical but its a great poem keep it up..........................
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon
Thanks for the awesome comments, and I will do my best to keep up the good work!
i love this poem bro it relates to real life and i have seen this on more than one ocassion my self . if this is going on for you my heart goes out to you
man ,and things will get better awesome poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
it's not happening to me Bro, but a friend of mine is going through it and I just used them as inspiration to the poem! I'm glad you like it though Bro!
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