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    Standing in the rain as water drips down my face
    I look down and see my shattered reflection in a puddle
    Thinking of a passionate love that once burned hot
    Being put out by your attitude like a freezing wind

    Thoughts of trying to regain that love no longer alive
    Watching my heart and emotions being buried six feet under
    A lifeless body stands there watching as the dirt piles up
    No tears able to flow like a river dammed up by stone

    I held you in my arms and heard you say that you loved me
    But yet I see you walking holding hands with another
    Walking down a red carpet that is my heart that once beat
    Forever my soul shall feel an eternal hell that will never end

    Then when he breaks your heart you come to me to cry
    Asking me to love you once again but there is nothing left
    Darkness has already set in and love has become hatred
    You look into my eye and see the fires of hell burning

    You realize the pain and anguish you have caused me
    Now you’re holding Satan who begins to laugh in your face
    The pain that once rained down on me begins to fall on you
    Now you look at the puddle of your tears shattered by love








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    Re: Shattered

    Very nice poem kinda dark but thats what makes it good, hope to read more.
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    Re: Shattered

    dark and cynical but its a great poem keep it up..........................
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    Re: Shattered

    Thanks for the awesome comments, and I will do my best to keep up the good work!

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    Re: Shattered

    i love this poem bro it relates to real life and i have seen this on more than one ocassion my self . if this is going on for you my heart goes out to you
    man ,and things will get better awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Shattered

    it's not happening to me Bro, but a friend of mine is going through it and I just used them as inspiration to the poem! I'm glad you like it though Bro!

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