Shattered December

!Vincent_the_Victorious · Jul 13, 2006, 10:03 PM

I kept silent and it rained for days,
My insides were drenched,
But I guess that's the part of growing up,
I never wanted to learn.

So I grew into the man that you never knew,
But I wouldn't be the same if it wasn't for you,
A hundred "Thank you's".
If this is love,
Then fairy tales come true,
Judies are black in full bloom,
And I died in the womb.

Take it back,
All that's yours,
It's all still there like you left it.
December stayed the same,
Nothing ever changed but you,
Nothing ever changed but you.

Every dream is covered in dents,
Love can't fly tonight,
Couples will rest,
I'll be sleepless.
Cry yourself to sleep,
This is about broken hearts,
This is about me,
bending again for nothing.

I run to you but pain awaits,
I'm coming home but I'll be late,
No deeper than imagination can be,
Sight with nothing to see.

What's faith if I can't believe?
It's everything,
A cure,
But I make it a disease.

God take me,
Because I hate me....

hamu-hamu · Jul 13, 2006, 11:31 PM

wat a sad poem...well it did to me. anyhow it was really really good. keep up the good work.

elie26 · Jul 14, 2006, 01:23 AM

Quote:

If this is love,
Then fairy tales come true,
Judies are black in full bloom,
And I died in the womb.

Nicely done!

And excellent title to attract ppl too ^_^
there was a repetition in the 3rd stanza and well...it seemed to have ruin part of the poem ^^''""
Anyways...great work

!Vincent_the_Victorious · Jul 14, 2006, 09:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by elie26

Nicely done!

And excellent title to attract ppl too ^_^
there was a repetition in the 3rd stanza and well...it seemed to have ruin part of the poem ^^''""
Anyways...great work

lol It's a song. So that's the reason "Nothing ever changed but you" was repeated. Thanks for your reply though. Well, onto other business...

Shinigami's_Angel · Jul 15, 2006, 12:41 AM

Wow,it's really good Vincent.It was sad but at the say time wonderful.I loved it.

Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.

SousukeSagara · Jul 15, 2006, 02:45 AM

Very well done... Hope there will be some tune to guide us next time next time...

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 15, 2006, 03:29 AM

awesome poem i have read it sevral times
and i even saved it to read again later

Jul 13, 2006, 10:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
!Vincent_the_Victorious Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Right Freakin' Here!! Posts: 130 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -167	Shattered December I kept silent and it rained for days, My insides were drenched, But I guess that's the part of growing up, I never wanted to learn. So I grew into the man that you never knew, But I wouldn't be the same if it wasn't for you, A hundred "Thank you's". If this is love, Then fairy tales come true, Judies are black in full bloom, And I died in the womb. Take it back, All that's yours, It's all still there like you left it. December stayed the same, Nothing ever changed but you, Nothing ever changed but you. Every dream is covered in dents, Love can't fly tonight, Couples will rest, I'll be sleepless. Cry yourself to sleep, This is about broken hearts, This is about me, bending again for nothing. I run to you but pain awaits, I'm coming home but I'll be late, No deeper than imagination can be, Sight with nothing to see. What's faith if I can't believe? It's everything, A cure, But I make it a disease. God take me, Because I hate me....
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hamu-hamu ~ beri-chan ~ Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 534 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Shattered December wat a sad poem...well it did to me. anyhow it was really really good. keep up the good work. __________________
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Jul 15, 2006, 12:41 AM	#5 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,171	Re: Shattered December Wow,it's really good Vincent.It was sad but at the say time wonderful.I loved it. Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	Re: Shattered December Very well done... Hope there will be some tune to guide us next time next time... __________________
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	Re: Shattered December awesome poem i have read it sevral times and i even saved it to read again later __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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