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Reply With Quotewat a sad poem...well it did to me. anyhow it was really really good. keep up the good work.
I kept silent and it rained for days,
My insides were drenched,
But I guess that's the part of growing up,
I never wanted to learn.
So I grew into the man that you never knew,
But I wouldn't be the same if it wasn't for you,
A hundred "Thank you's".
If this is love,
Then fairy tales come true,
Judies are black in full bloom,
And I died in the womb.
Take it back,
All that's yours,
It's all still there like you left it.
December stayed the same,
Nothing ever changed but you,
Nothing ever changed but you.
Every dream is covered in dents,
Love can't fly tonight,
Couples will rest,
I'll be sleepless.
Cry yourself to sleep,
This is about broken hearts,
This is about me,
bending again for nothing.
I run to you but pain awaits,
I'm coming home but I'll be late,
No deeper than imagination can be,
Sight with nothing to see.
What's faith if I can't believe?
It's everything,
A cure,
But I make it a disease.
God take me,
Because I hate me....
wat a sad poem...well it did to me. anyhow it was really really good. keep up the good work.
Nicely done!If this is love,
Then fairy tales come true,
Judies are black in full bloom,
And I died in the womb.
And excellent title to attract ppl too ^_^
there was a repetition in the 3rd stanza and well...it seemed to have ruin part of the poem ^^''""
Anyways...great work
lol It's a song. So that's the reason "Nothing ever changed but you" was repeated. Thanks for your reply though. Well, onto other business...Originally Posted by elie26
Nicely done!
And excellent title to attract ppl too ^_^
there was a repetition in the 3rd stanza and well...it seemed to have ruin part of the poem ^^''""
Anyways...great work
Wow,it's really good Vincent.It was sad but at the say time wonderful.I loved it.
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
Very well done... Hope there will be some tune to guide us next time next time...
awesome poem i have read it sevral times
and i even saved it to read again later
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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