Thread: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

Originally Posted by viper11025

She:

She is an angel,
An angel of the dark heavens,
A lovely white dove that for my part I have never held, felt, loved,
I wish to love her so,
So loving,
So caring,
So gental,
She I am so longing for,
I cry while waiting for her!
She is an angel,
An angel I myself wish to know of,
An angel I myself wish to be with,
She is my angel, And I am her fallen love.
On Earth I stay, and suffer for her.

wow dude, that's a nice poem!

nicely done! i would prefer poems to be longer though..... but gd work

What a classic. All about the girl. I like it. It was well done, but short.

Whether the poem is short or long, it jus has to be gd to be read and appecirated.

The pain of waiting for someone to come and love you sure it is painfull, nice poem man good job keep it up.

Im sorry...... I cant fully relate this poem to the concept of love...... T_T I am poetically challenged.......

But putting that aside, I felt quite a lot of passion from the words. Very meaningful and depressing at the same time. Great words

Thnx...
I am trying to think of more put time is a challange for me sometimes...