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    She:

    She is an angel,
    An angel of the dark heavens,
    A lovely white dove that for my part I have never held, felt, loved,
    I wish to love her so,
    So loving,
    So caring,
    So gental,
    She I am so longing for,
    I cry while waiting for her!
    She is an angel,
    An angel I myself wish to know of,
    An angel I myself wish to be with,
    She is my angel, And I am her fallen love.
    On Earth I stay, and suffer for her.

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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    Quote Originally Posted by viper11025
    She:

    She is an angel,
    An angel of the dark heavens,
    A lovely white dove that for my part I have never held, felt, loved,
    I wish to love her so,
    So loving,
    So caring,
    So gental,
    She I am so longing for,
    I cry while waiting for her!
    She is an angel,
    An angel I myself wish to know of,
    An angel I myself wish to be with,
    She is my angel, And I am her fallen love.
    On Earth I stay, and suffer for her.
    wow dude, that's a nice poem!

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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    nicely done! i would prefer poems to be longer though..... but gd work

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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    What a classic. All about the girl. I like it. It was well done, but short.
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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    Whether the poem is short or long, it jus has to be gd to be read and appecirated.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    The pain of waiting for someone to come and love you sure it is painfull, nice poem man good job keep it up.

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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    Im sorry...... I cant fully relate this poem to the concept of love...... T_T I am poetically challenged.......

    But putting that aside, I felt quite a lot of passion from the words. Very meaningful and depressing at the same time. Great words
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    Re: " She " A tribute to the painful reality of love.

    Thnx...
    I am trying to think of more put time is a challange for me sometimes...

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