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Old Sep 14, 2006, 05:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Arrow She wrote this for me~

Closing my eyes to the real deal
the true of the matter
I won't be in his heart like the other
I won't be with him wihout him thinking about her
I will never have his heart to myself
I will never be there to touch him
Like you did to him
You will always be one step ahead,
and you know how to say your words.
Leaving me all touge twisted. Not able to tell
Him how much I want him

Because I will always be second best.
Yes I know what I am and I closed my eyes to it
I made myself believe that she didn't matter
Even when you cried over her, and I was there to hold you
When you loved another than myself, and I was there to help,
and helped you when You mourned, but I could never have you.

I can't have you now can I?
even thou I have your hand, but I don't have your heart.
I hate being second best.
So I will leave, and I won't think twice
It is best this way. For you and for me
You won't have to lie to your heart, and I won't to mine
YOu won't have to say words you don't mean.
Just because I love you. I don't want to make you love me.

I want none of you pitty, or your mercey.
Right know. I just want you to be happy, but I know I can't

I wasn't lying when I said I love you.
I was always there loving you, but I could never get close
I know now. I do. That your heart does not belong to me, but another.
I wish I do. That I can have you, but I must let you go.

I love you, and goodbye.
No looking back. Now.


We're over it now! ^_^
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Old Sep 14, 2006, 05:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: She wrote this for me~

very cool poem reave and i love this point of view
i mean to love someone just so you want feel lonly
is lieing to your self and the other person. And i think
love as you explained is sort of compliicated but
can be delt with if the opertinuty presents its self.
but theres no right or wring answear unless you make
one up.
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Old Sep 14, 2006, 06:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: She wrote this for me~

Oh!!! that poem of yours seems to have so much intense emotions, that is expressed by your good choice of words and style.
just be careful with the spelling, it is also essential in a poem.
you have your own way with words ^^
all in all superb job. ^^
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Old Sep 14, 2006, 06:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: She wrote this for me~

now this is real love and the passion is so stuned good poem keep it up
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Old Sep 14, 2006, 07:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: She wrote this for me~

Rave!!!!!!!!!
My dear brother that was beautiful!!!!!!!!
LOneness does over welm poeple even me some times that is the reason i hook up
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Old Sep 14, 2006, 07:15 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: She wrote this for me~

can you be more specific about the poem please i didnt understand what that meant
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Re: She wrote this for me~

Rave man the poem is awesome and deep! It has a an intresting twist to it, but it captures the true emotion of loving someone, but them not being able to love you back because there heart belongs to another! Oustanding!!!! Keep up the good work Rave!
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*looks down* pretty poem.....reminds me of someone......
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*looks down* pretty poem.....reminds me of someone......
Ya think.................................well it does remind remind me of.........*GET GAG FROM BEHIND*
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