wow cool story
i love it
k ill pm you the whole chapter.
If I'm the hated one why do poeple talk to me
If poeple don't like me then why not kill me
Am I the one to be killed in my mind?
wow cool story
i love it
I REALLY LIKED IT!!! not to sound mean but i think you could have used more cammas ans periods ya know??? and insted of knives raining down it should have been....ummm....-can't think-...slivers of ice! or Shards of ice! or ICE SICLES!!!! sorry if i am mean -punch-
ha but really good...
be more realistic cause you have potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YEA GO FOR IT!!!!
That was a really nice story, i am looking forward for more of your fanfics.
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