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    Re: Shigeki

    k ill pm you the whole chapter.
    If I'm the hated one why do poeple talk to me
    If poeple don't like me then why not kill me
    Am I the one to be killed in my mind?

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    Re: Shigeki

    wow cool story
    i love it

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    Re: Shigeki

    I REALLY LIKED IT!!! not to sound mean but i think you could have used more cammas ans periods ya know??? and insted of knives raining down it should have been....ummm....-can't think-...slivers of ice! or Shards of ice! or ICE SICLES!!!! sorry if i am mean -punch-
    ha but really good...
    be more realistic cause you have potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YEA GO FOR IT!!!!

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    Re: Shigeki

    That was a really nice story, i am looking forward for more of your fanfics.

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