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    shine

    shine

    shine
    that's what you do
    everyday i see you
    you and me, we shine
    brighter than the sun

    we are connected
    by this feeling
    we shine
    brighter than the stars
    during the full moon

    i guess what i'm
    saying is that you
    can brighten up
    anyones life

    well tell me what u think?
    hey this one is for my good friend kuwi!!! thanks kuwi u r the best!!!
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    Re: shine

    Your so sweet ryomakurosaki really!!!!!!!!!! I thank you so much really! Your just too nice really!!!! So I thank you so much!!!! Your an awesome friend!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: shine

    Its really good.I really enjoyed reading it.Goo job.

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    Re: shine

    I liked it it was pertty good i think good job

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    Re: shine

    thanks this one was for kuwi but i want all my friends to know this poem is also about u!! thanks guys! without u i wouldn't have posted my poems
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    Re: shine

    It's a nice poem. Make sure to add periods and capitalization for a better look, but the poem itself is really good. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: shine

    well i have to say, great poem. simple straight forward with a great flow to it.

    and i tell u what, it definately makes ur friends feel warm inside light with that shining light. good work.

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    Re: shine

    very nice love the it flows
    girl u have a rael nack for write
    it something that cheer any body up when there down
    great work hope read more from u.

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