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Jul 10, 2007, 10:03 AM
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  Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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 Credits: 10,073 | shine shine shine that's what you do everyday i see you you and me, we shine brighter than the sun we are connected by this feeling we shine brighter than the stars during the full moon i guess what i'm saying is that you can brighten up anyones life well tell me what u think? hey this one is for my good friend kuwi!!! thanks kuwi u r the best!!!
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Jul 10, 2007, 10:28 AM
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 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 12,671 | Re: shine Your so sweet ryomakurosaki really!!!!!!!!!! I thank you so much really! Your just too nice really!!!! So I thank you so much!!!! Your an awesome friend!!!!! 
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Jul 10, 2007, 11:05 AM
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Credits: 1,660 | Re: shine I liked it it was pertty good i think good job 
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Jul 10, 2007, 06:19 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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Credits: 10,073 | Re: shine thanks this one was for kuwi but i want all my friends to know this poem is also about u!! thanks guys! without u i wouldn't have posted my poems
__________________ Can't believe I could think that he would just follow me everywhere I go I just wrestle with you in my dreams and wake up making love to my pillow Videos of the week(updated next on June 15):http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjAsrwW9ptU Last edited by ryomakurosaki; Jul 10, 2007 at 07:05 PM. |
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Jul 10, 2007, 07:33 PM
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Credits: 2,708 | Re: shine It's a nice poem. Make sure to add periods and capitalization for a better look, but the poem itself is really good. Keep up the good work.
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Jul 11, 2007, 07:27 AM
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| Community Dude  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Australia, Newcastle
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Credits: 7,466 | Re: shine well i have to say, great poem. simple straight forward with a great flow to it. and i tell u what, it definately makes ur friends feel warm inside light with that shining light. good work.
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Jul 12, 2007, 08:55 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, U.T.
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Credits: 1,505 | Re: shine very nice love the it flows girl u have a rael nack for write it something that cheer any body up when there down great work hope read more from u. |
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Jul 12, 2007, 09:35 AM
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 King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 2,378 | Re: shine true friendship is rare and when you have a friend that helps your day go smoothly things will never go wrong because your friend will be there for you to help you out. awesome poem |
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