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Old Mar 15, 2007, 05:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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a short goodbye

Twilight is gone
and i think it is time.
The perfect time.
A time to bid thee
a fair goodbye.
My time with you
was very beautiful.
I hope we will have it
again together.
i would hope to
have it much longer.
But time envies us
and we can't be together no more.
But, Fear not.
For i think that a goodbye
is only temporary.
So, farewell.
May we meet again...



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Old Mar 15, 2007, 05:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: a short goodbye

Nice poem Ray i liked it and glad that u posted it.
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Old Mar 15, 2007, 06:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: a short goodbye

pretty good poem. Fix a few errors and it will be even better. Great job.
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Old Mar 16, 2007, 03:25 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmm excuse me deodaclan18 could u help me and point out the errors u found
so i could fix it? ^^ ty
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Re: a short goodbye

Really good poem Ray.
I really like it.
There were a few mistakes
But what poem dosn'e have any.
Any way I hope to see more of your work.
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Ty ^^ but my work comes slow.. sigh..
i can't get ideas~!!! arggggggghhhh~!!
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