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    a short love poem

    everytime we lie awake
    everytime we stay away
    i don't stop thinking about you
    i still don't know why
    i still don't know why i love you
    everytime we take a feeling
    we stay awake to take our time thinking about it
    everytime we take a hit
    it was just like the first time we ever met
    it was like our smiles were meant to be
    just the stars that are shining in christmas eve
    you are in me
    as i am in you
    to me it's you that matters
    to me it's you that i love
    i do , will and forever love you
    you are my reflection that stays with me
    you are me my shining light
    you are the very beauty of this life
    you are the world to me
    but all i can say now is
    i love you
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    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: a short love poem

    Quote Originally Posted by powerxxx
    you are in me
    as i am in you
    to me it's you that matters
    to me it's you that i love
    i thought this was pretty sweet. good job!


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    Re: a short love poem

    excellent; i loved it! very touching!!!
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    Re: a short love poem

    ive read a few poems 2day and i yours is the best so far !! keep the good work up :P

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    i love it it cute and makes me smile my friend ^^ i guess u were right about the poem writing.
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    Re: a short love poem

    A very sweet and touching poem
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    Re: a short love poem

    Wow a great and well put together poem! Its great! Secound poem of yours that I have read and I can clearly see you are good at it!

    you are my reflection that stays with me
    you are me my shining light
    you are the very beauty of this life
    you are the world to me
    but all i can say now is
    i love you
    This was what I believe is the best part of your poem, ties everything together.
    Keep it up!

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