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Old Jun 21, 2006, 09:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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a short love poem

everytime we lie awake
everytime we stay away
i don't stop thinking about you
i still don't know why
i still don't know why i love you
everytime we take a feeling
we stay awake to take our time thinking about it
everytime we take a hit
it was just like the first time we ever met
it was like our smiles were meant to be
just the stars that are shining in christmas eve
you are in me
as i am in you
to me it's you that matters
to me it's you that i love
i do , will and forever love you
you are my reflection that stays with me
you are me my shining light
you are the very beauty of this life
you are the world to me
but all i can say now is
i love you
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 10:00 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: a short love poem

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you are in me
as i am in you
to me it's you that matters
to me it's you that i love
i thought this was pretty sweet. good job!
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 10:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: a short love poem

excellent; i loved it! very touching!!!
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Re: a short love poem

ive read a few poems 2day and i yours is the best so far !! keep the good work up :P
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:17 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i love it it cute and makes me smile my friend ^^ i guess u were right about the poem writing.
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A very sweet and touching poem
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Re: a short love poem

Wow a great and well put together poem! Its great! Secound poem of yours that I have read and I can clearly see you are good at it!

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you are my reflection that stays with me
you are me my shining light
you are the very beauty of this life
you are the world to me
but all i can say now is
i love you
This was what I believe is the best part of your poem, ties everything together.
Keep it up!
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