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    "short poem"

    the world's becoming bright
    but I cry my last cry tonight.

    I lift the knife to my skin
    and say good-bye to the world I'm in.
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    Re: "short poem"

    no wonder the title is "short poem"

    but I have to say that it is a bit dark.
    and the others of yours I have read are way better than this one.
    but good effort.

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    Re: "short poem"

    yeah I know this isn't my best poem ever written,
    but I was tired and late night,
    so this what I came up with.

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    Re: "short poem"

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    the world's becoming bright
    but I cry my last cry tonight.

    I lift the knife to my skin
    and say good-bye to the world I'm in.
    lol thats like so emo
    but awesome
    i have one like that

    The knife cuts to soothe
    as red falls to the floor
    for i will say true to you
    ever more

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    Re: "short poem"

    glad you guys like it ^__^
    and starfire1036
    that's a good poem
    I like it.

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    Re: "short poem"

    inflicting pain to one self is nostalgic and sometimes
    a good idea when things seem out of control because you
    control your own body and hows its used in the end, so its
    sort of like a sick power trip to show what you say goes.

    and its sad to see how it takes one inflicing cuts and the the like
    too see if they still feel , very awesome poem here i like it and thisis what
    i got from it.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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