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    Re: short poem (sorry)

    mmm...good point. thanks 4 the tip! i appreciate it! i'm 11, goin on 7th grade. so that's y poems r short.well, not exactly that i make more than 5 a day.
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    When i was your age my poetry was way different, also longer and more in depth. But you'll catch on. Read others poetry and get tips k!

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    different, how so? and o.k


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    They were way more mature and in depth like i had mentioned earliar.

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    mature? do u remember any of them, if so would u mind giving me example?


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    My life has a path
    Through which it will go
    Where it may take me
    God only knows
    I have to live this life
    The way it was meant to be after i was baptized
    God knows i try
    Its extremly hard when i am living two lives
    One through many sins
    The other careful to avoid every one of them
    I want to live one life
    But my faith isnt that stong as others might
    People put doubts in my mind
    Things that will keep me busy and leave the other life behind
    To keep Lucifer from blocking the light
    I want my faith in God to always be there and be strong
    So someday when im gone
    I'll see him in heaven and say "Here i am Lord, i did it, i held on"
    And he'll say "Well done my child, but your path has only begun"

    I have a memory book from middle school and that was one of them in there. Took me forever to rewrite that here! I have better ones around here somewhere, too tired to look right now. But that was about the struggle with my Christianity and my father poisoning the truth. Rhymed more that i would have liked though.

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    yes, sis.

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