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    Short and Sweet

    For those who have
    Missed out on something special,
    Your loss is my gain
    For i love him more than words can say.
    For those who treated him
    The way he never deserved to be,
    Thank you for bringing him to me..
    Without him i still wouldn't understand
    what they meant when they say
    "With him... it's different"
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Short and Sweet

    Well this is the kind of free form that is nice. nice touch to the ending to. good luck on writing and uhh....with him too lol.
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    Re: Short and Sweet

    Aw, this is so sweet. And well written. I must say... Im not sure I can relate to this feeling. But you sold it. I mean I can totaly vibe with you, without even being able to say I've had a simular experience.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Short and Sweet

    thats sweet, i luv the 2end line it was so sweet! your a greate poet

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