Thread: should i

It's neat, but the poem is kind of loosely worded, which made it look really simple. However, work with it, using pronounced descriptive works and it will turn out great!

awwwwwww thank you kedar *hugs* and i will try to do that k ^_^

^_^ Basic, but got the point though and thats what so many should do. Most do no. Longer next time~

Makes me think of something that happened recently with me and a girl, I wasn't ready to move in a day's notice so I gave my answer and that ended it there. Saddly she didn't take it and it ended our little fun too, it's sad when people can't just accept things as they are and have to ruin things just because you can't make others do what you want them to.

About your poem: I see confusion and acceptence of the consequences, but there is a lot of responsibilities in doing that. If it's part of your life, I wish you good luck

thank you every one lol ( im in school and im really --^__^-- right now cos no one knows about the poems yetTT__TT) lol

very cool poem but telling them should be best ut know that love is a two way street protect your heart

NIce way of putting a confession parctise into a poem.