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    When I Think of You

    When I think of you
    A smile comes to my face
    When I look at you
    My heart begins to race

    You occupy my dreams and my thoughts
    And now look at the joy you’ve brought
    You are the pinnacle of the life I lead
    And your loss would devastate me

    It feels like I’m dreaming of a fantasy
    Each night I dream of you next to me
    Feels so good, this day and night
    Nothing I’ve ever done felt this right

    They may have better looks and things
    But these other guys don’t know your needs
    I’ll be the only one there when you ring
    Because you mean so much to me

    I’d give my life
    For you in a minute
    Because I can't imagine
    My life without you in it

    Just dug this up. this is my first poem dating probably early 2002, thought i'd share it with you guys
    Last edited by kamikazekrn; Sep 05, 2007 at 04:31 AM. Reason: Deleted other poem because it's crap
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    Re: When I Think of You

    Quote Originally Posted by kamikazekrn View Post
    When I think of you
    A smile comes to my face
    When I look at you
    My heart begins to race

    You occupy my dreams and my thoughts
    And now look at the joy you’ve brought
    You are the pinnacle of the life I lead
    And your loss would devastate me

    It feels like I’m dreaming of a fantasy
    Each night I dream of you next to me
    Feels so good, this day and night
    Nothing I’ve ever done felt this right

    They may have better looks and things
    But these other guys don’t know your needs
    I’ll be the only one there when you ring
    Because you mean so much to me

    I’d give my life
    For you in a minute
    Because I can't imagine
    My life without you in it

    Just dug this up. this is my first poem dating probably early 2002, thought i'd share it with you guys
    I like this... But It frightens me... I began to lose faith in love this strong.. And when people are in such love... I fear for them. The higher the love brings someone... They're at risk of falling harder.

    I must say however... the text in your signature rocks my socks!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: When I Think of You

    nice poem kamikazekrn^^
    it reminds me of someone dear
    keep up the good work

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