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    Sickness Of My Mom

    As I lie down on my bed and hugged my mom.
    I felt her heart that she was about to die.
    I dunno what will happen to me when she's gone in my life.

    Oh dearest and wonderful Lord.
    Please help my mom to get better soon.
    I love my mom very much, and I don't want her to die yet.

    I would rather sacrifice my life for her.
    I would rather be sick than her.
    I would rather be dead other than her.

    My mom was the first best friend I have ever had when I am still a child.
    I was the first one to see her with those beautiful smile in her face.
    I was the one who hugged her tightly around my arms.

    Please make her safe.
    Please make her well.
    Please give her srenght.

    I don't care if I die.
    I just want my loving mom be happy in life.
    And I will be also happy that she is still safe.

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    Note: I want to dedicate this poem to my dearest and wonderful mother.
    Last night I was crying so hard that I thought she will die. I hope she won't leave me.

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    Oh MY GOD This poem is so sad!!!!!! Oh my god theres so much emotions with it to me!!!! Oh well it was an amazing most awesomest poem right now! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Sickness Of My Mom

    I hope your mother recovers ....I lost my mother at 11 ...i am now 16 ....its not a happy life......I dont ever wish this feeling on anyone....I will pray for your mother tonight,and everynight....may god bless you on this, and grant you bliss.....

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    When I read that I was just about to cry I to had lost my parents when I was only 3. I will pry for your mom and hope that she recovers fast. Do not lose hope and do not lose fath. I know that you are going it is a hard time and I hope that she makes it ok. Just be strong and if you need someone to talk to just e mail me and I will help you the best way that I can.

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    Re: Sickness Of My Mom

    wow ...that was very sad and hurt ...
    hope no one can lose his mother ...that was very sad poem you writed ..you imporove girl ...keep up ...hope your mother get well sooooon...
    Last edited by xxoxx; May 29, 2007 at 08:53 PM.

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    Thank you everyone. I started making poems since I was a little girl. ^_^ And thank you for all your support to me.

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    Re: Sickness Of My Mom

    Aww that is so sad. I am very sorry...I know what it's like to be in your position. My mum used to have cancer. She's better now though. I hope your mum gets better soon
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Sickness Of My Mom

    omg i am so sad!! r u okay? i'm soo so sry. i am here if u need help
    talk to me if u need any help.
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