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    Silence

    Beast And I make this one

    A night of long surging sadness is in her way
    she knows not he is part of a tragic slay
    He went out for something hours past, then worry
    Darkness comes, with it a long night of sadness

    A long night starts in total silence
    She does not cry, it remains silent
    Sitting in silence stews her into self blame
    Why send him out; months and months she feels the same

    No idea what it meant that night as he went
    Chilled to the bone she felt she would stay alone
    Something returns, her heart burns, silence is blown
    Memories of moments and months of love are back

    Energy goes back to Earth but love stays here
    She realizes this and lives on with no fear
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    Special thanks to Beast because he helped to make my poem a better one!
    Thank you very much Beast for helping me!
    I owe you one.

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    Re: Silence

    Quote Originally Posted by Eizhen View Post
    __________________________________________________ ______________
    Special thanks to Beast because he helped to make my poem a better one!
    Thank you very much Beast for helping me!
    I owe you one.
    You owe me nothing. I enjoy writing poetry and especially collaborating. It leads to interesting work like this. I couldn't have thought of a theme like this.

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    Re: Silence

    I'm still an amateur in poem making and I'll have lots of fun learning here in AO.

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    Re: Silence

    Excellent job to both of you! I have done a collaboration with a buddy of mine before and it is always fun especially when working with a more experienced writer, you really learn a lot. That is how I learned to write and i certainly have a long way to go lol
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