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    Silence is Golden

    Do you hear that?
    Complete silence
    It's deafening and evil
    You evil, evil silence
    You won't fool me
    Pretending to be
    Peaceful
    As you tear me apart
    A seducing
    Tranquil evil

    So quiet
    You're so welcoming
    You're not welcome here
    My hell's coming
    You won't trick me again
    Trick me into hoping
    You won't last forever
    You're too easily broken

    Cause I'll hear you
    Speak volumes
    Your presence felt immediately
    And poof, you're gone
    Too soon

    Stop!
    Stop calling me
    Stop whispering
    My name
    I hear you so
    Clearly
    I'm forcibly insane

    I'm paranoid, petrified
    As you rip me open
    I'll say you're cold as
    Metal but you're
    Sure as hell not
    Golden

    Cover my ears
    You're so cold
    And poisonous
    Get underneath our skin
    With your lies
    And you poison us

    But no more
    I won't be deceived
    By your peacefulness
    Cause all you really are
    Is the sound of our emptiness
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    wow i think your more emo than me
    but other than that this guy im guessing is not of your likeing
    so i hope this other guy that you know well put you back togather
    i hope you well for the years to come
    the one and only show that rocks my socks
    the one show that i cant live
    with out.

    soul society will live on forever in the minds of its poeple!!!

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    wow ..nice poem ..emo kid here is right u do sound emo ..that's awsome..i think ur words ar sharp and deep ..^.^..keep up the great job..hope to here more from you ..*meow*

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    very amazing poem and truly yhr depths of emptiness
    can be related to the hell that most live thrugh because
    of love , hate , vegnence etc. and how you stand up to
    it shows you have strength that willmake your will hard
    to break.

    i loved this poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    wow.... ^.^ that was a nice and funny poem... Why can there not be more silence in this world... There is to much noise...(good Poem!) It is funny how much you relate the death to silence ^.^
    death and life are one and the same

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    I gotta admit that was pretty good poem you wrote, I say way better than mine I suppose lol. you have my respect and keep writing, I really like to see more of your work.

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    Re: Silence is Golden

    *eyes wide and heart pounding* WOW..... your poem is so full of emotions I felt them strait from the heart, you have a way of peircing though, nicely done, The words go well with the title too, I like this one, ohhh pain, anyways very nicely done, I look forward to more of your poems.
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    Re: Silence is Golden

    Hmn... Yeah, a nice poem ^_^! I think you've done a great job in expressing this poem. Nice one -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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