BrightShadow_96

here's a poem i wrote. hope u like it

Silent Dreams


Alone in the dark, or so it seems
Listening for your silent dreams
Watching life pass you by
Waiting for the chance to fly

Chaos reigns though you ignore it.
As if someone took your faith and tore it
So you sit there, waiting, moping
There is no point in hoping

This chaotic world is much too fast
There is no way that we will last
Destiny simply will not change
And fate will not rearrange

Contemplating in the cold
Searching for the tales untold
But when a light shines and beams
Go and find your silent dreams

Dark nights and depressing sights
With bleak intentions and raging fights
But how can we find a way to live?
Every path seems negative

The light is gone and isn’t coming back
A sense of structure is what we lack
Death is near and isn’t going
Yet our blunt world still keeps growing

Maybe a light is still near
We might have dreams that we can hear
We should get rid of these unhappy themes
And move on to less silent dreams

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Mr. K

Cool. This must be your first in which you posted. i like it. It has the feel about it. You know.... but i like it

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deftbeat

i like it..
great work, keep it up

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BrightShadow_96

thanx. i actually wrote this poem at school. i was so bored. . . . .so i decided to write this poem!

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Shu

Wow! Thats great!Good job!

Blade X

Nice, this is wut everyone should try when they are bored in school.

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BrightShadow_96

lol. the past few days at school we haven't been doing anything interesting. i could have made a hundred poems by now! usually the prob with me writing poems is getting ideas for the theme of the poem, and it's hard to get inspiration while ur bored.

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Jon f

Yes that is truth.But try think of one thing and then go on. That is what I do.But I don't like to write them down.I get some but I think they are special.That is keen of why I don't write many .{Ok mustly because I suck at spelling and my hand can't keep up with my thoughts.And I will just said poems out of the blue 2 out 5.The other times is when I have to said a poem or something really smart}

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elie26

o.O i like it.....very depressingj/k

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Nameless Shadow

Wonderfull I'd like to see more.

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P.R. Princess

Wow!Wow! I LOVE IT . IT'S GOT TO BE ON EOF THE BEST POEMS I'VE EVER READ. I'M MEAN IT REALY MAKE YOU THINK MAN THAT A AWSOME POEM!
YOU SHOULD BE A POET EVEN THOUHG YOU MIGHT NOT HAVE KNOW IT
HAY WAS THAT A PHYME. IF IT WQAS COOL.
WELL I LOVED THE POEM KEEP IT UP