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    Silent Dreams

    here's a poem i wrote. hope u like it

    Silent Dreams


    Alone in the dark, or so it seems
    Listening for your silent dreams
    Watching life pass you by
    Waiting for the chance to fly

    Chaos reigns though you ignore it.
    As if someone took your faith and tore it
    So you sit there, waiting, moping
    There is no point in hoping

    This chaotic world is much too fast
    There is no way that we will last
    Destiny simply will not change
    And fate will not rearrange

    Contemplating in the cold
    Searching for the tales untold
    But when a light shines and beams
    Go and find your silent dreams

    Dark nights and depressing sights
    With bleak intentions and raging fights
    But how can we find a way to live?
    Every path seems negative

    The light is gone and isn’t coming back
    A sense of structure is what we lack
    Death is near and isn’t going
    Yet our blunt world still keeps growing

    Maybe a light is still near
    We might have dreams that we can hear
    We should get rid of these unhappy themes
    And move on to less silent dreams

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    Cool. This must be your first in which you posted. i like it. It has the feel about it. You know.... but i like it
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    Re: Silent Dreams

    i like it..
    great work, keep it up

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    thanx. i actually wrote this poem at school. i was so bored. . . . .so i decided to write this poem!

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    Wow! Thats great!Good job!

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    Nice, this is wut everyone should try when they are bored in school.

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    Nice, this is wut everyone should try when they are bored in school.
    lol. the past few days at school we haven't been doing anything interesting. i could have made a hundred poems by now! usually the prob with me writing poems is getting ideas for the theme of the poem, and it's hard to get inspiration while ur bored.

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    Re: Silent Dreams

    Quote Originally Posted by BrightShadow_96
    lol. the past few days at school we haven't been doing anything interesting. i could have made a hundred poems by now! usually the prob with me writing poems is getting ideas for the theme of the poem, and it's hard to get inspiration while ur bored.
    Yes that is truth.But try think of one thing and then go on. That is what I do.But I don't like to write them down.I get some but I think they are special.That is keen of why I don't write many .{Ok mustly because I suck at spelling and my hand can't keep up with my thoughts.And I will just said poems out of the blue 2 out 5.The other times is when I have to said a poem or something really smart}
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