silver wings

love is all around me
it just surrounds me
it came from you
the one who is true
suspended on silver wings

these silver wings are ready to soar
with the only person i adore
i want to be with you
and only you....
to kiss ur lips

all this love holding me
sends all the pain i feel far away
then silver wings appear
and i know that you are near
i hear your voice calling out to me
then 1000 words cradle me

i look for u
but i only hear ur voice
i need ur touch
in order to fly
the world feels so cold when ur not by

yours words are like a dream
then you appear in front of me
and i know you've been there with me all the way
all the way through this pain
then you are carried back into my arms
carried on silver wings

me and ryomakurosaki did another one for you lot hope you like it

Adorable!!!! A wonderful poem!!!! I love it!!! Good work you both!!! ^^ Don't know how you do it, but it's just great!!!

You can feel the love shining through this one... great!!!
"then silver wings appear
and i know that you are near" > my two favourite lines ^^

I'll be waiting forward for another one!

thanks lasura i think it's good to do a poem with someone else it makes it more interesting glad you like it

this poem is full of hope and
hapiness you can feel the love
flow as you read it , i like that
affect .

very awesome poem

cheers for that we might do another some day if people like em that is can't tell yet though there not many post:laugh:

Awwwwww.....How cute!!! It's just so romantic!!!! I just love it really!!! It's just so adorable and romantic to read it!!!! Really!!!!! I do hope to see more!!!! :D:

well thanks and hopefully you will depends on what sort of poem we write next