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  1. Jun 13, 2007 05:21 AM #1
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    silver wings

    love is all around me
    it just surrounds me
    it came from you
    the one who is true
    suspended on silver wings

    these silver wings are ready to soar
    with the only person i adore
    i want to be with you
    and only you....
    to kiss ur lips

    all this love holding me
    sends all the pain i feel far away
    then silver wings appear
    and i know that you are near
    i hear your voice calling out to me
    then 1000 words cradle me

    i look for u
    but i only hear ur voice
    i need ur touch
    in order to fly
    the world feels so cold when ur not by

    yours words are like a dream
    then you appear in front of me
    and i know you've been there with me all the way
    all the way through this pain
    then you are carried back into my arms
    carried on silver wings

    me and ryomakurosaki did another one for you lot hope you like it


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  2. Jun 13, 2007 05:46 AM #2
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    Re: silver wings

    Adorable!!!! A wonderful poem!!!! I love it!!! Good work you both!!! ^^ Don't know how you do it, but it's just great!!!

    You can feel the love shining through this one... great!!!
    "then silver wings appear
    and i know that you are near" > my two favourite lines ^^

    I'll be waiting forward for another one!

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  3. Jun 13, 2007 05:48 AM #3
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    Re: silver wings

    thanks lasura i think it's good to do a poem with someone else it makes it more interesting glad you like it


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  4. Jun 13, 2007 06:36 AM #4
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    Re: silver wings

    this poem is full of hope and
    hapiness you can feel the love
    flow as you read it , i like that
    affect .

    very awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
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  5. Jun 13, 2007 06:40 AM #5
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    Re: silver wings

    cheers for that we might do another some day if people like em that is can't tell yet though there not many post


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  6. Jun 13, 2007 09:54 AM #6
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    Re: silver wings

    Awwwwww.....How cute!!! It's just so romantic!!!! I just love it really!!! It's just so adorable and romantic to read it!!!! Really!!!!! I do hope to see more!!!!
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  7. Jun 13, 2007 09:58 AM #7
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    Re: silver wings

    well thanks and hopefully you will depends on what sort of poem we write next


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