Simple thoughts

Shade/K' Heart · Nov 30, 2006, 01:20 PM

I can't write.
Words won't come out.

Too much on my mind.
Too much hurt here.

I'm not home,
and that hurts.

Not happy,
and not with her.

I pray I'm there soon,
and pray i'll not pain so much again.

Maybe,
just maybe...
I'll be able to see her smile soon too.

as well as myself.

By: White Rose

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Nov 30, 2006, 03:39 PM

very cool poem and the pain you speak of is hard for some
but once you over come it everything becomes easier ,but
its that first step away from the pain that's the hardest now not everyone
has the same pain but the results are all the same this aspect of pain is
very sad ,but once you meet your goal that pain will go away.

Sincere · Nov 30, 2006, 05:22 PM

Nice poem and the fact that it's short just makes your point even clearer. Very simple and to the point. I liked this.

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Shade/K' Heart Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: I am always near... Posts: 409 Thanks: 10 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,889	Simple thoughts I can't write. Words won't come out. Too much on my mind. Too much hurt here. I'm not home, and that hurts. Not happy, and not with her. I pray I'm there soon, and pray i'll not pain so much again. Maybe, just maybe... I'll be able to see her smile soon too. as well as myself. By: White Rose __________________ Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	Re: Simple thoughts very cool poem and the pain you speak of is hard for some but once you over come it everything becomes easier ,but its that first step away from the pain that's the hardest now not everyone has the same pain but the results are all the same this aspect of pain is very sad ,but once you meet your goal that pain will go away. __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	Re: Simple thoughts Nice poem and the fact that it's short just makes your point even clearer. Very simple and to the point. I liked this. __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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