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    Simple yet melancholic life

    My life is simple yet melancholic
    Not trying to be emo or anything,
    But just writing how I feel.
    People might think I’m a lost cause, but some have more sorrow
    Than others who are lucky to be happy

    I’m a nightmare, a disaster, that’s one thing they always said
    I’m a lost cause, not a hero. But I tried to make it on my own
    I tried to be happy, but I saw death
    I saw people dying
    They left me and I tried to toughen up, giving up my emotions
    Yet I kept on smiling.

    Nothing happened, until the day I fell in love
    But little did I know it was the biggest mistake
    … I would ever make
    All I got were dramas, hurtful comments
    Heartbreaking rumors which were true

    I've got no place to go
    I've got nowhere to run
    They love to watch me fall
    They think they know it all

    More than the number of times I suffered, more than the number of times I doubt,
    I want the number of times I laugh and trust others, and I pray that it'll happen in my life.
    Even though I was always a side character, even though I'm a shadow,
    Let me be in the center when I dream. Let me be honest.

    I want to cry but my eyes fail
    All the sadness burns in my heart
    Trying to escape by my throat
    But it all just remains inside me, hurting me

    All the pain and misery fires it up
    All the sad memories pains in my heart
    I have been escaping from a lot of things
    I terminate those decisions

    The most important thing is always
    Without any shape
    Even if you have it or lose it
    You'll never know

    I’ll still be there somewhere, either alive or else
    I’ll still be watching this world go by..
    After the skies cry, there is a rainbow
    Who knows the last time I see it, would be my last?

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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    WOW that was awesome brother, and yet so sad, your poems are so full of remorse and yet still so beautiful, (^_^) I like this one it is really good keep it up gut try one that isnt so sad.
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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    Rushil I like your poems and they always make me think and feel strange inside I guess. Good job. Keep it up
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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    the second verse sounds real good, keep it up and hope to see more of your work

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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    Well, buck up man. LIVE(/EVIL) your life as best as possible. Get stubborn and make it through life as if you wanted to stick it to God. When you find yourself in Hell, at least you had the strength to make it worthwhile! At least you didn't give in to weakness and killed yourself! Give yourself more credit for putting up with the bullshit that is 85&#37; of life.
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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    I know, I had to let it out.. you know, it's not like I'm gonna repeat my mistakes.

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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    Don't! Live and Learn. Take advantage of ppl if need be. Make yourself the most important person in your life. Don't settle for anything less than success.
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    Re: Simple yet melancholic life

    Guess you're right.. but some people are close o me.. I'll think about it >_<

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