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    Simply be.

    A room full of people and I'm all alone
    Trapped in my head cus I've never been shown,
    Trust, unconditonal love, or loyalty.
    Friends have always gone without defending me.
    My hearts been shattered and prized apart,
    Leaving a gaping hole in my heart.
    Life is hard and often confusing,
    When forever there is a fear of losing,
    Everyone that I hold dear to me.
    They say they love me, yet I wonder how can that be?
    THey can't see the dark and evil thoughts,
    Growing vast like wild forget me nots.
    My bodys weary and my soul needs refreshing.
    But the girl in my head keeps me questioning,
    If they can see the ugly things living inside me.
    Or if the dillusion they think is me, will continue to simply
    Be.

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    Re: Simply be.

    Wow. This is a great piece of poetry you've got here. ^_^

    I love it. It's so emotional and inquisitive at the same time. You did well, Chan.


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    Re: Simply be.

    Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I wrote it at the cabin. I had a good time but...those people don't know me. You frank and sherm are the only ones who really do.

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