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    Daughters of Eve, and Adam’s sons,
    The fruit still lingers on our tongues.
    Its juices poison our thoughts unclean.
    And, the times we partake, don’t go unseen.

    Can you feel it slithering up your spine,
    With intent to keep your spirit blind?
    Though our paths are lit, and we hear the voice,
    Our creator has given us a choice.

    Do not fall victim to its lure
    To be hurtful, vicious, or impure.
    Evil lurks, with a stench of decay,
    Which strengthens when we lose our way.

    Its desire for our souls, will never cease.
    But, the promises will bring us peace.
    Though the moment is trying, if we’ve come to it.
    God promises to get us through it.

    His all-seeing eyes, they look upon us.
    His loving hands are wrapped around us.
    What we lose in sin, faith will recover.
    And, what we need, we will discover.

    If crimson fire pulls us back.
    If we seek false truths, in faith we lack.
    Know that sin is humanity’s disease.
    The cure, is falling to our knees.

    *Note: I am NOT very religious, this poem is written for a religious event... So I played the part. I am spiritual... And I believe everything I have written... Only I typically do not personify "God" (He, his, father, ect.)
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Sin.

    Nice... I like it very much... Spiritual and... teaching.. It was very interesting to read this and it made me feel bad too... It's surprisingly effective, really made me feel bad 'bout how evil and sunful this world is...

    Anyways, it was very nice to read your work again and I hope to see more too ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Sin.

    the sins of the father are so often
    visited on the son that is what comes
    to mind here and living with sin that was brough
    about by another is something that happens to often.

    i loves this poem for the fact that it shows no matter
    what you do or how you try and move on with life that ONE
    sin stays with you untill you forgive your self because if you ask for
    forgivness yu will get it but if you dotn forgive your self the forgivness
    dosnt count.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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