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    Sing to me My poetry

    Sing to me | My Poetry
    My poetry won't sing
    My poetry won't sing to me

    How many years has it been
    Has it been since that feeling

    The feeling of the rush
    The feeling of the surge
    The whimsical wind becoming clean breath
    The weighty boulder pressing its existance
    The fire burning through my entire body

    Oh how I miss these feelings
    Oh how I'd love to feel it again

    Sing to me my poetry
    Sing to me

    Let the light of the moon
    And the darkness of nothing
    Fill me up inside
    And awaken my existing eyes

    Lend me your help one more time
    To create one more poem for the year
    A poem for the day
    The day that makes the year

    Oh fleeting words
    Come back to me

    Enter my chest and light the flames one more time
    Enter the tanden and awaken what has been sleeping
    Enter into existance and revive the soul of my heart

    Please sing to me my poetry
    Please sing to me


    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    Its been nearly 2 years since I've written a good poem. And I need that part of me again... my gf and I's 5th year anniversary is coming up in less than a week - and I want to make it feel as special as I can.
    My poetry didn't sing for me last year, so I had to make due.
    Hopefully this year my emotion comes back to help me write the best I can offer.
    I need to write again. I need to.

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    Re: Sing to me My poetry

    Aw~ Darling~

    it's beautiful and sweet and sad and wonderful~

    ^_^ you always have it Sweetie~

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    Go Sosh! This is awesome. And I feel this way all the time.
    My poetry never sings to me anymore. but I still share it. I figure maybe my poetry just doesn't like me, but it might tickle someone elses fancy..
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soshi Kitai View Post
    Sing to me | My Poetry
    My poetry won't sing
    My poetry won't sing to me

    How many years has it been
    Has it been since that feeling

    The feeling of the rush
    The feeling of the surge
    The whimsical wind becoming clean breath
    The weighty boulder pressing its existance
    The fire burning through my entire body

    Oh how I miss these feelings
    Oh how I'd love to feel it again

    Sing to me my poetry
    Sing to me

    Let the light of the moon
    And the darkness of nothing
    Fill me up inside
    And awaken my existing eyes

    Lend me your help one more time
    To create one more poem for the year
    A poem for the day
    The day that makes the year

    Oh fleeting words
    Come back to me

    Enter my chest and light the flames one more time
    Enter the tanden and awaken what has been sleeping
    Enter into existance and revive the soul of my heart

    Please sing to me my poetry
    Please sing to me


    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    Its been nearly 2 years since I've written a good poem. And I need that part of me again... my gf and I's 5th year anniversary is coming up in less than a week - and I want to make it feel as special as I can.
    My poetry didn't sing for me last year, so I had to make due.
    Hopefully this year my emotion comes back to help me write the best I can offer.
    I need to write again. I need to.
    thats really good i hope to read more...hopefully your poetry will sing to you at least one more time so you can writing one more poem and feel the rush of writing at your fingertips just one more time
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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