Thread: Sinking

I certainly did enjoy reading it. It's such a great poem. I love it. Keep up the super work. ^_^

@ Tifa Lockhart: ^^ I am happy that you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your comment =^^=

gotta agree with tifa there... super work Love this 1 ^^

This is nice keep up the good work ^^

^^ Thanks for your comment Rayme, for this poem that I made. I keep on writing to hone my skills. ^^

very awesome poem Raja love can leave with an
empty spot when they leave and with how things
can seem so desprate the best advice to recover
is to let go of that love with no emotion attached.

i say this because its hell living through a break up
with love in your heart , let it go and ignore that lump
in your throat because no tear is worth shedding over anyone
who leaves.

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very awesome poem Raja love can leave with an
empty spot when they leave and with how things
can seem so desprate the best advice to recover
is to let go of that love with no emotion attached.

i say this because its hell living through a break up
with love in your heart , let it go and ignore that lump
in your throat because no tear is worth shedding over anyone
who leaves.

Agreed. Although, I will be the first one to say that it's not easy. I'm still learning how to let go myself. It's a challenge, but like Dark Chalice said, no body who leaves--intentionally--deserves any tears.

I loved this poem! It was very well written. I hope to read more! ^_^

Originally Posted by raja_psyche

Sinking

Why do you have to go?
Don't you love me like you used to?
What is your intention of doing this?
I am clueless as you gave me that last kiss...

All alone tonight in my room,
My mind is invaded with images of doom.
How can see a much brighter day,
When you, my light, left me astray...

My ears are filled with numerous voices,
My heart is kicked by black horses,
My eyes are swelled with blood and stones,
I am holding a knife, no one knows...

Wherever you might be,
I hope that you aren't that happy,
I want to blame you for all of these,
But it's you I definitely miss...

I am now sinking in my thoughts,
Thanks to the trap that you brought,
That love you made me believe,
That you would always give.

my notes: This poem is something that just came out of my mind moments ago. I hope you do enjoy reading this ^^

interesting
most of my poems are like that lol
you should check them out lmao