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    @ Chris : wow! Thanks for your comment and your awesome advice. ^^ Yeah, it's hard letting go of a love once shared and known... it really takes time for the wounds to heal... its hard to be in a situation wherein LOVE is the emotion you hold into... and it was too late for me to know that i should not shed any tears for someone who made me feel useless and empty...

    @ atomik_sprout: Thanks for your comment too, I do agree that someone with the intension of leaving the one he/she loves does not deserved any tears... but in my case, it took a long time for me to realize that it is useless to cry for someone who will not come back... Thanks for the encouragement, i'll try to write more ^^

    @starfire1036: Thanks for your comment about this poem. I look forward to read your poems too in the future. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Wow,

    Your poem is really well edited, Had a very nice flow and sounds really sweet!

    The picture went really well with it too.

    I enjoyed reading this and I would love to hear more from you.



    -Zainab

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    @ ZAinab: ^^ Thank you very much for commenting this poem, as well as the picture that I put there. ^^ I am happy to know that you enjoyed reading this poem.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Sinking

    Quote Originally Posted by raja_psyche View Post

    Sinking

    Why do you have to go?
    Don't you love me like you used to?
    What is your intention of doing this?
    I am clueless as you gave me that last kiss...

    All alone tonight in my room,
    My mind is invaded with images of doom.
    How can see a much brighter day,
    When you, my light, left me astray...

    My ears are filled with numerous voices,
    My heart is kicked by black horses,
    My eyes are swelled with blood and stones,
    I am holding a knife, no one knows...

    Wherever you might be,
    I hope that you aren't that happy,
    I want to blame you for all of these,
    But it's you I definitely miss...

    I am now sinking in my thoughts,
    Thanks to the trap that you brought,
    That love you made me believe,
    That you would always give.


    my notes: This poem is something that just came out of my mind moments ago. I hope you do enjoy reading this ^^
    Wow nice poem i really like it
    Oh yeah what anime did the girl in sig come from or is it origanl.
    I sEe YoU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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