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    sinner

    never should have gone this far away
    now it seems, that the dream is imposible
    never made a differance
    so why should i try so hard

    now i know no matter how hard i try
    it will always be the same

    i am driven by hate consumed by fear

    when i look at them
    everyone looks at me but they don't see
    what i have inside

    the things that i want i cannot have
    the things i need i cannot get

    can you understand
    now i'm here
    with this comes frostration

    i am far from done
    the truth that i am afraid of
    is sitting infront of me

    i want to realize through my eyes
    that i can't speak
    that i'm so damn weak

    everybody knows about me
    everybody except me

    they sware it's real
    but i can't believe that i am who they say i am

    now i say this once more
    when they look at me
    they don't see
    understand
    that i am a
    SINNER
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
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    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: sinner

    again powerful meanings. its cool


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    Re: sinner

    i agree with RCP it has very powerful meanings.....lol i love ur poems....i think i'm going to read all the ones u write my friend.
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    I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.

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    Re: sinner

    do you write the poems and make them into songs or do you write poems that are meant to be just read aloud?

    pretty nice, either way

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    Re: sinner

    A very good poem... Sinner it is...

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