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    Sister

    In my eyes you are you are
    A wonder and I feel we are not apart
    You keep me shining in the darkest place
    That painful smile that shows in your face

    Why are you in pain though?
    What is it that causes you so....?
    Let me be that light in your existence
    Bring forth my presence...

    Sweet sweet soothing voice
    Comes above that ruffled noise

    Is it you? Or is it he?
    I cannot see who it could be?
    Is it an angel or is it the devil?
    No it cannot compare up that that level

    Take my hand and we'll walk together
    Walk throughout the changing weather

    Diamond diamond shining bright
    What could truly make so light?
    Is it you or is it he?
    I cannot see who it could be?

    As the music soothes the soul
    and it's getting very low.....
    low......
    low......

    But now as we come to unfold
    All these things that you we're told
    Is it you or is it he?
    I cannot see who it could be?

    Open my eyes and the image shows
    My dear sister.....who would know......
    Know the pain and my sorrow
    There today and there tomorrow

    As we gently move to the symphony....


    For Lyla


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    Re: Sister

    Wow that was a beutifull poem Pryo. good job keep up the good work I liked it.
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    Re: Sister

    Thank you very much there hun.
    I put my heart into this poem because someone deserved it for being there for me, through thick and thin. Thank you for your comment ^^


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    You are verry welcom Pyro I am always glad to give advice when advice is due. I liked it.
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    Re: Sister

    Awwww..........that is really sweet!!!!!!
    You must have a great relationship with your sister!!!!!!!
    Nicely done!!!!
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    Re: Sister

    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    Awwww..........that is really sweet!!!!!!
    You must have a great relationship with your sister!!!!!!!
    Nicely done!!!!
    Yes, we even think the same which is creepy to me at least O__o;;
    Thank you very much for the comment ^^


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    Re: Sister

    beautiful... ^^ nicely done.. i like it keep up the good work ^^

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