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Sep 25, 2007, 04:53 PM
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  hates Naruto  Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Pasadena, TX
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 Credits: 5,207 | Sister In my eyes you are you are A wonder and I feel we are not apart You keep me shining in the darkest place That painful smile that shows in your face Why are you in pain though? What is it that causes you so....? Let me be that light in your existence Bring forth my presence... Sweet sweet soothing voice Comes above that ruffled noise Is it you? Or is it he? I cannot see who it could be? Is it an angel or is it the devil? No it cannot compare up that that level Take my hand and we'll walk together Walk throughout the changing weather Diamond diamond shining bright What could truly make so light? Is it you or is it he? I cannot see who it could be? As the music soothes the soul and it's getting very low..... low...... low...... But now as we come to unfold All these things that you we're told Is it you or is it he? I cannot see who it could be? Open my eyes and the image shows My dear sister.....who would know...... Know the pain and my sorrow There today and there tomorrow As we gently move to the symphony.... For Lyla |
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Sep 25, 2007, 06:38 PM
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 Dragonrider  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,723 | Re: Sister Wow that was a beutifull poem Pryo. good job keep up the good work I liked it.
__________________  ナサン フォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173 |
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Sep 26, 2007, 05:21 AM
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| hates Naruto Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Pasadena, TX
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Credits: 5,207 | Re: Sister Thank you very much there hun. I put my heart into this poem because someone deserved it for being there for me, through thick and thin. Thank you for your comment ^^ |
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Sep 26, 2007, 07:17 AM
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| Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,723 | Re: Sister You are verry welcom Pyro I am always glad to give advice when advice is due. I liked it.
__________________ ナサン フォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173 |
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Sep 26, 2007, 03:20 PM
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| Chtonian Slayer  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know
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Credits: 31,396 | Re: Sister Awwww..........that is really sweet!!!!!! You must have a great relationship with your sister!!!!!!! Nicely done!!!!
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Sep 27, 2007, 09:26 PM
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| hates Naruto Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Pasadena, TX
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Sep 29, 2007, 02:15 AM
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| 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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