Thread: sisters

omg i would like to say it on behalf of everyone u deticated the poem too we would like to say thank you you are a great sister too!

I LOVE YOU CHIICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg i love tha poem to!!!
yay!!!!!*ahem* nice words good plot and needs to be longr.
im just fillin up space

Lol thanks guyz I was hoping that you would like it, but it does need to be longer sigh...

I actually think the poem is perfect i wouldn't change a single line. YOu displayed your emtions and bonds between you and your sisters brilliantly an, i highly doubt it could be better than it is now... "seeing its a perfect poem"

There is a feeling of warmth in your words that made me smile and I'm certain that your sisters appreciated what you offered them even if your gift is but a few words among many that they will see. What counts is your true emotions that you feel for them and find a way to portray your feelings in your poem, which I think you did quite well.

Thinking of which, my father's birthday is in 4 days....maybe I should do something....I'm broke......I know! Poetry!!!

fma1012 excellent job expressing your feelings of love for you sisters, and anyone who has always been there for you! It doesn't matter if it's short! Like Soldat of Life said the feeling of warmth still makes me smile because I have two sisters myself and I definitely know the feeling! Great Job!

i think it is great just the way it is because the words that she put are words of kindness and warmth in the heart and i theink that is very important in a poem that is being tributed to a person you know and love i think it is better than the poems i do here at home