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Reply With QuoteThe rhythm of this poem is excellent............and the words and short and sweet
Great job!!!!!!!
I stroll into my room,
then I pick up my guitar.
I say, "I'm going for a walk,
I'm not headed very far."
Wander 'round the block,
until I look and see the park.
I'm thinkin', "This would be a
nice place for me to start."
Occupy a bench and start
tuning my strings. A perfectly
tuned guitar makes my heart sing.
Play a few songs, try to sing
yet, out of key. It's a good
thing no one's here to sit
and point and laugh at me.
Now that the music's out
my system I can head back
to the house. "I'm home, I
had to go and sort my mind out."
The rhythm of this poem is excellent............and the words and short and sweet
Great job!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
You are a guitarist also... Talented or blessed whichever you choose... ^_^ Well I must agree this poem is short & sweet, but also creative... Sometimes you amaze me with some of the work you come up with... Keep up the good thought & work...
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
Originally Posted by Astaroth
Thanks be to both of you for commenting on my experiment. ^_^You are a guitarist also... Talented or blessed whichever you choose... ^_^ Well I must agree this poem is short & sweet, but also creative... Sometimes you amaze me with some of the work you come up with... Keep up the good thought & work
It's been quite some time since I wrote something other than poems that scream, "I'm EMO!!" So, I figured I'd post this one and see how it fares. I'm glad you both liked it! Thank you for taking time to read this!
Short.. and right to the poem with nice descriptions... the imagery is very nice... keep it up ^^
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dude, this is great. i like it quite a lot, and it speaks to me because i, also, am a guitarist. that's basically kind of a life i live, that's is the best, keep up the great work.
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