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    Six-String Meditation

    I stroll into my room,
    then I pick up my guitar.
    I say, "I'm going for a walk,
    I'm not headed very far."

    Wander 'round the block,
    until I look and see the park.
    I'm thinkin', "This would be a
    nice place for me to start."

    Occupy a bench and start
    tuning my strings. A perfectly
    tuned guitar makes my heart sing.

    Play a few songs, try to sing
    yet, out of key. It's a good
    thing no one's here to sit
    and point and laugh at me.

    Now that the music's out
    my system I can head back
    to the house. "I'm home, I
    had to go and sort my mind out."


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    Re: Six-String Meditation

    The rhythm of this poem is excellent............and the words and short and sweet
    Great job!!!!!!!
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    Re: Six-String Meditation

    You are a guitarist also... Talented or blessed whichever you choose... ^_^ Well I must agree this poem is short & sweet, but also creative... Sometimes you amaze me with some of the work you come up with... Keep up the good thought & work ...

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    Re: Six-String Meditation

    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    The rhythm of this poem is excellent............and the words and short and sweet
    Great job!!!!!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by Inuruto View Post
    You are a guitarist also... Talented or blessed whichever you choose... ^_^ Well I must agree this poem is short & sweet, but also creative... Sometimes you amaze me with some of the work you come up with... Keep up the good thought & work ...
    Thanks be to both of you for commenting on my experiment. ^_^

    It's been quite some time since I wrote something other than poems that scream, "I'm EMO!!" So, I figured I'd post this one and see how it fares. I'm glad you both liked it! Thank you for taking time to read this!


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    Re: Six-String Meditation

    Short.. and right to the poem with nice descriptions... the imagery is very nice... keep it up ^^

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    Re: Six-String Meditation

    dude, this is great. i like it quite a lot, and it speaks to me because i, also, am a guitarist. that's basically kind of a life i live, that's is the best, keep up the great work.

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