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    Sky High

    I wonder why the sky is so high.
    Why I can't reach it, no matter how hard I try.

    Or even why it's always colored blue.
    If it could speak I'd ask, "What's wrong with you?"

    I often wonder why so many people try to fight me.
    That's just wrong no matter hou much you dislike me

    Such a shame someone would waste thier time
    tryin' to rob me and keep me from makin' these rhymes.

    Here comes the rouser of this rabble.
    He wants another battle.
    Sneakin' up on mother F***as,
    poppin' out the shadows!!!

    He won't get my money.
    'Cause you see, I'm broke, G.
    All he gets is pocket lint
    and roaches for his homies.

    Now that that's over, let's move on.
    I don't want to keep you while I ramble all day long.

    Because if I did, you'd probably get bored.
    Then after that, my poems would probably be ignored. ^_^

    But anyway, I wonder how my city still thrives;
    Between the crime rate, the lack of schools and HWY 35.

    I mean, damn! Does this place need more problems?
    Can't we find somebody who is willing to solve them?

    You ever wonder what it would be like to live in a tree?
    Like the Keebler elves? Yeah! Get your cookies for free!!

    Or maybe high up in the mountains, where the air is thin.
    Would you live there all alone, or would you bring along your kin?

    Many thoughts and questions come and go within my head.
    So many that sometimes, all I want is to go to bed.

    Yet, here I am still reaching up to grab the sky.
    My hands way up in the air, still asking the clouds, "Why?"


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    Re: Sky High

    It's long..But I like it very much! It's totally something I can actaully see myself doing lol It's really good!
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: Sky High

    Quote Originally Posted by rikus demonic lover View Post
    It's long..But I like it very much! It's totally something I can actaully see myself doing lol It's really good!
    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I know it's a bit long--one of my longest in fact--and I apologize. I'm happy you took the time out of your day to read my "novel". LOL. Thanks again! ^_^


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    Re: Sky High

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    I wonder why the sky is so high.
    Why I can't reach it, no matter how hard I try.

    Or even why it's always colored blue.
    If it could speak I'd ask, "What's wrong with you?"

    I often wonder why so many people try to fight me.
    That's just wrong no matter hou much you dislike me

    Such a shame someone would waste thier time
    tryin' to rob me and keep me from makin' these rhymes.

    Here comes the rouser of this rabble.
    He wants another battle.
    Sneakin' up on mother F***as,
    poppin' out the shadows!!!

    He won't get my money.
    'Cause you see, I'm broke, G.
    All he gets is pocket lint
    and roaches for his homies.

    Now that that's over, let's move on.
    I don't want to keep you while I ramble all day long.

    Because if I did, you'd probably get bored.
    Then after that, my poems would probably be ignored. ^_^

    But anyway, I wonder how my city still thrives;
    Between the crime rate, the lack of schools and HWY 35.

    I mean, damn! Does this place need more problems?
    Can't we find somebody who is willing to solve them?

    You ever wonder what it would be like to live in a tree?
    Like the Keebler elves? Yeah! Get your cookies for free!!

    Or maybe high up in the mountains, where the air is thin.
    Would you live there all alone, or would you bring along your kin?

    Many thoughts and questions come and go within my head.
    So many that sometimes, all I want is to go to bed.

    Yet, here I am still reaching up to grab the sky.
    My hands way up in the air, still asking the clouds, "Why?"
    u do kno the sky isnt actually blue right its actually black

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    Re: Sky High

    I keep thinking that to myself alot when I look at the sky. I like this poem sprout very thought out.

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    Re: Sky High

    WoW!!!! @.@ A very nice poem... Just what I think about my little stinky village... *looks out the window* yea... *sigh*
    Indeed it would be much nicer to live in a tree and quite alone...
    Lol ^^ I remember how once in school I wrote: "I don't have time to look at the sky." and I remember how my teacher took a grade of because of that... I guess that made me think... the sky is wonderfull....

    Anyways, a very nice work ^^ I'll be waiting forward for more!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Sky High

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    WoW!!!! @.@ A very nice poem... Just what I think about my little stinky village... *looks out the window* yea... *sigh*
    Indeed it would be much nicer to live in a tree and quite alone...
    Lol ^^ I remember how once in school I wrote: "I don't have time to look at the sky." and I remember how my teacher took a grade of because of that... I guess that made me think... the sky is wonderfull....

    Anyways, a very nice work ^^ I'll be waiting forward for more!
    Thanks, Laura! It's always a pleasure to know that you like my writing. ^_^ The sky is a marvelous thing, isn't it?

    Iceviper and souledge, thanks to you too! I appreciate your comments and your taking the time to read my poem.


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