slang tongue twist

Brand extension on the rez:
hiliger, adidas, nike, klein
hang loose on brown bodies,
from hats to pants even cool undies.

Walking billboards is the lastest trend
on our littered pow-wow grounds,
there's not enough long braids that dangle
or mother tongue words that tangle.

Skins dance,
but not to the pow-wow drum
it's a hip-hop beat from he ghetto streets.
Here they break dance, a funky horse prance,
flip high fives and slameach other's mothers
and lay the beats to their blood brothers.

Brand extension reaches
bush rez and rezurbia,
a disillusion of community
where skin is againist skin
in a neo-warrior gang clash.

Nice poem it had some good rhyming and told a good story.

I like your word usage and your ryhme as well. The first stanza is my favorite because of the word undies. :laugh: Anyway, I enjoyed it. It made me smile. Can't wait to read more.

It's something new and interesting. I commend you for stepping out of the box. And you did it wonderfully.

cool poem I liked it very much ^_^
hope to see more

Thats was sweet. I like it!!! It told a interesting story. :)