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    Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    Before you read, here is how I feel:
    I feel like slappin somebody today (slap slap)
    Slappin somebody today
    I feel like slappin somebody today (slap slap)
    Slappin somebody today
    Lovely lyrics from the all famous, LUDACRIS.

    And now, with the poem:

    Slap, Slap

    I go around this forum site, looking for some threads.
    But all I get are topics that have ALREADY been dead.


    If this is not the case, there's one topic always spoken of.
    The site gets flooded with poems about loving, or being loved.
    Or dying or crying
    or wishing and hoping
    or sighing or eyeing
    or scolding or moping.

    THEN there are those special members, who just LOVE to make me twitch.
    Their stupidity isn't contagious, they just need to go die in a ditch.
    Ah, let's not forget about those special people who feel they're "IT".
    With paragraphs among paragraphs, giving statements they feel are legit.

    And then there are those members. Who just wont quit -
    sending insulting PMs because they have no life, or
    asking you to join a site

    GOD sometimes I wish these people die.
    Don't ask me. Because I wont say why.

    BACK to the topic of this poem - the little wonders of AO.
    Like sigs entered in contests, that just make you say, "Woah."

    Haha, this poem is getting pretty rediculous
    but I need to get it out..
    I'm SICK of all the poems
    about being "depressed" or being "in doubt".

    And I'm sick of all these threads that come up just because;
    No purpose whatsoever, raising post count is what it does.
    Oh, and how can I forget the idiots that post lyk this.
    Theigh poust n poust n poust as ef sumon continyous to insistt.

    Oh, and of course there are those lovely members
    who overdo the smilies.

    ^As if that's necessary.

    And those who post one liners. What the hell is up with that?
    I'd rather be sitting at home, licking fur off of a cat.
    Than reading THAT.

    There's so much more that I could say, but unfortunately
    I must stop.
    Because if I go on any longer, your eyes are sure to pop.

    The summary of this all?
    Well, it's as simple as White wine.
    No matter how bad things can possibly get,
    I'll still be reppin' Anime Online..

    (slap slap)

    *The purpose of this poem WAS because I was a little upset about a few things.. but I took so damn long in writing it, I lost interest towards the end.
    C & C are welcomed.
    However, I really don't care if you don't like it.
    It's just out there for your entertainment.
    And mine. ;]

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    I liked it!!! It's so cool and it's LUDACRIS TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it's actually pretty funny sorry! But I like it!!!!!!! It's just so AWESOME!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    very cool poem bloue its really an aweosme poem
    and i am guilty of posting said poems lol but how you
    artisticly put your opinion out there is really awesome.

    speak your mind and dontlet anyone say diff
    and i agree with you on the point of people
    just posting for a raised post count *cough* not me *cough*
    but your way of telling it like it is really i great .

    hope to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    Even though it is stating what I already know, this is still quite humorous. Just beware that the poem might rub some members the wrong way. We don't want this to be a flame bait now do we?? Anyways I think you could improve upon it some visual aids that imply other members would make it humorous...

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    I really like this poem... And I'm sorry if I'm one of the guys you want to slap... PM me if it's so... I sometimes don't notice I do something stupid, that's why I am Lasura- misspelled Laura I try not to write love poems that much and I try better not to start thread at all (it's ALWAYS better to post in an existing thread) and I'd never revive a thread... again
    Ok, back to the topic for me (I just had to say I'm sorry)
    The poem has a lot of anger in it and still it's very cool and funny... I hope everyone reads this and feel a little sorry... A great work, I always admire those who can put any feelings in a poem like this...

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    cool poem that you got there!!!how did u think of that one!!!!

    thank you equinn!!!!!!

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    Haha... Original and hilarious! That was one hell of a verbal slap to AO.

    But.. Be easy on those of us with depressing poems... I know for some people (myself included) AO is the only place where its acceptable to get those feelings out. And when feelings of depression are held in... Oh the damage that could cause is irrepairable.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Slap, Slap [.1/3 of AO!]

    Very funny! ^_^ I like this poem. Lots of ranting on stuff that's totally true. Although--and I may be one of these people--writing about love and depression is a pretty normal thing. Love and sorrow are two of the biggest emotions a person can have; and without either of them, you're not really human. I do agree with you about the smiley overload too. It's ridiculous how people think that putting one measely sentence with about 1,000,000 smileys is gonna have any affect on how people are gonna react to their posts.

    My rambiling aside--Good job! ^_^

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