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    Slave.....

    Even I don't tell you,
    Your important to me
    Even I don't think of you,
    When I'm asleep your in my dream

    Even I'm look like a jerk
    Wish you could hear
    The scream of my feelings

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    I won't seek another
    In you I will be satisfied
    Whatever you say
    Trust that I will obey

    Almost everytime
    Were like cats and dogs dear
    In your arms I'm happy

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    Forced to catch the stars
    Just to stay with me

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    Because your the only one that I want to sit with
    Whether its cold or hot the night is
    I just want you to know
    Your the only one that I will love.....

    Any comments that are classified as nice or bad is acceptable so you can post here..... Thank you..... -Sousuke Sagara
    Last edited by SousukeSagara; May 23, 2006 at 12:21 AM.

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    Re: Slave.....

    that is really impressive, but who is the person you love?

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    Re: Slave.....

    I wonder the same, and you used repetetion of paragraphs, wich gives more meaning ^_^

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    Re: Slave.....

    Wow it was realy good
    Ihave to say I wish I had someone to hug everyday
    Keep up the great work ^_^

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    Re: Slave.....

    i loved it it was amazing i wish i had sombody who cared for me like that it made me cry

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    Re: Slave.....

    wow man, that was pretty kool, nice poem.

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    Re: Slave.....

    I wish I could make a poem about my girlfriend, but it comes out gibberish when I try to read it aloud.

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    Re: Slave.....

    wth, okay, so sagara is in love? XD... it was really nice though I think the grammar could be made better.................

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