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    A Slave To Your Thrist...

    "A Slave To Your Thrist..."


    I hunger for you, I thrist for your love
    I live for you, I'd die for you
    I'd protect you, I'd embrace you in your time of need
    I'm your slave, A slave to your cruel touch...

    "I give all of myself to you"

    I step out of the light, And into the darkness when you call
    I lie for you, I bare my neck to you
    I wait for the pain, As you look at me with lustful eyes
    You bare your fangs, I flinch as you kiss my neck...

    "I scream out when you bite down"

    Whispers in the dark, I wanna feed on your heart
    I want all of your love, but your heart is frozen
    I catch a wif of your sweet scent, And I can't help but to give in
    I moan and groan at your touch, I release my hold on reality...

    "I can't help but give into those whipsers"

    I beg for your touch, Even though your harsh and rough with me
    As I claw your back while trying to hold on, You bite down upon me
    I sceam as you and I both bleed, This is blissful pain
    As you drink up my blood, I lay there in between life and death...

    "I beg of you, Don't leave me"

    I'm drowning in your eyes, I can't break this contact
    I reach up for you, As you take my hand
    You kiss it as if I might break apart, Even though you already know I won't
    I wrap my arms around your next, Begging silently for you touch again...

    "Wont you please wrap me in your warm like frozen embrace?"

    Force me down, As I try to escape this blissful like pain
    Tie me down, Though your eyes seem to be the only thing that can
    Bruise my wrists and hips, As you have your wicked way with me
    Make me sream out in pain, But plead for that release...

    "Make me yours all over again"

    I hunger for you, I thrist for your love...please let me drink..
    I live for you, I'd die for you...even if it's by your hand..
    I'd protect you, I'd embrace you in your time of need...even though you don't need me..
    I'm your slave, A slave to your cruel touch...and love...

    "I give all of myself to you, And ask for you in return"

    I step out of the light, And into the darkness when you call my name..
    I lie for you, I bare my neck to you..as I feel your soft touch..
    I wait for the pain, As you look at me with lustful eyes..mine can't help but to widein in fear..
    You bare your fangs, I flinch as you kiss my neck...afriad of what's to come...

    "I scream out when you bite down, And moan as you lick away the trail of blood"

    You release me from the chains of reality, I can't help but to cry out in joy..though all I can do is sob..
    You look at me with such loving eyes, And I know your wondering why..
    I reach our for you and you take hold of me, As I softly press my lips to yours..
    You kiss me with such passion, You have givein me my new life...


    "For I am forever...A Slave To Your Thrist...and Love"

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    Re: A Slave To Your Thrist...

    Absolutely brilliant sis! Whoever reads this is gonna be so scared. I can tell you put alot of thought into it and I couldn't have done any better if I tried. Bravo!
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    Re: A Slave To Your Thrist...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Force me down, As I try to escape this blissful like pain
    Tie me down, Though your eyes seem to be the only thing that can
    Bruise my wrists and hips, As you have your wicked way with me
    Make me sream out in pain, But plead for that release...

    "Make me yours all over again"

    I hunger for you, I thrist for your love...please let me drink..
    I live for you, I'd die for you...even if it's by your hand..
    I'd protect you, I'd embrace you in your time of need...even though you don't need me..
    I'm your slave, A slave to your cruel touch...and love...

    "I give all of myself to you, And ask for you in return"
    I like the poem/song as a whole but these two stanzas I love. The first one makes me think of what it feels like to fall in love with someone. The whole bitter sweet saying is the first thing that comes to mind. Of how you want it but at the sametime you don't. The second reminds me of what someone goes through when they finally realize that they have fallen for the other person. Only to find out that thier feelings won't be returned, but still hold a place in their heart for them. The whole thing flowed very nicely together and was very well written. Good job. I can't wait to see more of your stuff.

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