Well, I find this piece to be very repetitive- "blankets". It'll be more interesting if they were other descriptions and such. Still, it's ok. ^^
I sleep with sadness
like I would a blanket,
all tangled up in sheets
that I have been thrashing
at all night long.
Because of nightmares,
wishful thinking,
and the noise of grinding teeth
while I sleep.
While I live, for that matter,
and I keep piling on more blankets
to try to stay warm,
but the blankets accumulate.
Like my sadness,
and somehow,
I have to wake up
and throw all those blankets
onto the floor.
Well, I find this piece to be very repetitive- "blankets". It'll be more interesting if they were other descriptions and such. Still, it's ok. ^^
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