Here I am once again
I fall once more
The temptation was to strong
I could not avoid it
and I fell there again
breaking the promise
I once did to you
Now it does not matter
how many times I say that I am sorry
I have said it so many times
That the word lost its meaning
I fell once more there
and I don't feel I can get up again
Tell me what you guys think please
Last edited by lebasiara; Mar 02, 2007 at 03:41 PM.
Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!!"show me.... THE BEAST!!!" The Beauty and the Beast movie
A poem of hopeless desire. Very nice, leb-chan. Nice one you made, here. Keep it up Oh, and this line:
o.< fix please. lol.breakinging the promise
Well I'm glad I helped you catch that mistake. Continue to write poetry, lebasiara. You have promising talent.
I like it... Keep up the good work! As I read this I thought of my want and desire to do something I've been told not to, and how hard I try not too. But I always end up doing it in the end. It may be a day, weeks, or months, but I always end up doing it again. Like I said, I like it! It made me relate to myself, and I love poems I can do that with. I can't wait to read more of your writings!
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
nice poem...i agree with whitey...i hope u continue 2 write more... ^^
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