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Feb 15, 2007, 11:49 AM
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 | smackdown heres another one... yeah ive been on a roll, dont hate me for it smackdown its a smackdown a rockdown, im back to fight again here i am standing tall, standing in the middle of the ring. alone against the odds, but still walking tall. i aint got to tag team partner in this life. but i aint giving up, ill grab life by its horns its time to wrestle with the depression, time to fight for life and love. i might be alone, but i wont give in. ill lay the smackdown on all the try to harm my heart im going with the flow, starting to glow. im going to mow you all down. im fighting not for fun but for surival. ill stand strong, ill lay that smackdown and put it all on the line im fighting to find the right partner to fight with me its one heck of a royal rumble in here, but i will find someway to win
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Feb 15, 2007, 01:57 PM
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| Re: smackdown Quote:
oh! lol I see it(your sig) now ok .. I like this one its feels fast and a aggressive but in a good way lol does that make sense?  | |
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Feb 15, 2007, 01:59 PM
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| Re: smackdown of course it makes sense! wanna be my tag partner? hahahh just kidding i know you wouldnt want to be that
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Feb 16, 2007, 12:42 PM
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| Re: smackdown Y'know, this poem isn't all that bad, using proper grammar would help it a little. Also, I saw many lines that had just to many words in them... sometimes you need that many but other times you don't. Great job on the poem.
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Feb 17, 2007, 09:24 PM
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| Re: smackdown thanks and i know about the grammar i make a disclaimer at the beging of all poems.....
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Feb 17, 2007, 09:40 PM
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| Re: smackdown hey thanks dark moon cat. you just have to think sometimes, and use stuff around you and whats going on in your life.
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