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    smackdown

    heres another one... yeah ive been on a roll, dont hate me for it

    smackdown

    its a smackdown a rockdown, im back to fight again
    here i am standing tall, standing in the middle of the ring.
    alone against the odds, but still walking tall.
    i aint got to tag team partner in this life.
    but i aint giving up, ill grab life by its horns

    its time to wrestle with the depression, time to fight for life and love.
    i might be alone, but i wont give in.
    ill lay the smackdown on all the try to harm my heart
    im going with the flow, starting to glow.
    im going to mow you all down.

    im fighting not for fun but for surival.
    ill stand strong, ill lay that smackdown and put it all on the line
    im fighting to find the right partner to fight with me
    its one heck of a royal rumble in here, but i will find someway to win
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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    Re: smackdown

    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    heres another one... yeah ive been on a roll, dont hate me for it

    smackdown

    its a smackdown a rockdown, im back to fight again
    here i am standing tall, standing in the middle of the ring.
    alone against the odds, but still walking tall.
    i aint got to tag team partner in this life.
    but i aint giving up, ill grab life by its horns

    its time to wrestle with the depression, time to fight for life and love.
    i might be alone, but i wont give in.
    ill lay the smackdown on all the try to harm my heart
    im going with the flow, starting to glow.
    im going to mow you all down.

    im fighting not for fun but for surival.
    ill stand strong, ill lay that smackdown and put it all on the line
    im fighting to find the right partner to fight with me
    its one heck of a royal rumble in here, but i will find someway to win
    oh! lol I see it(your sig) now ok ..
    I like this one its feels fast and a aggressive but in a good way
    lol does that make sense?

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    Re: smackdown

    of course it makes sense! wanna be my tag partner? hahahh just kidding i know you wouldnt want to be that
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    cute ..........................
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    Re: smackdown

    Y'know, this poem isn't all that bad, using proper grammar would help it a little. Also, I saw many lines that had just to many words in them... sometimes you need that many but other times you don't.

    Great job on the poem.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: smackdown

    thanks and i know about the grammar i make a disclaimer at the beging of all poems.....
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: smackdown

    it really good....never thought of something like that,but still good!

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    Re: smackdown

    hey thanks dark moon cat. you just have to think sometimes, and use stuff around you and whats going on in your life.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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