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    Small dream.

    Again trying to make decent poem..
    This is dedicated also to my loved one...for you Tanja.

    Our lifes, our dreams --
    they fade away.

    Is there something --
    even something --
    that we can do --
    so that people, will remember--
    remember what we did,
    and what we were.

    Only some can see --
    how our dream, was ment --
    ment to happen.
    But why can't we show --
    that small dream, to all --
    to everyone.

    When I walk in shadows,
    I dream about life --
    about this life --
    that our parents --
    and our friends denied.

    We have to see
    that small seed.
    That could grow-up
    and reveal, our dream --
    our dream of life.
    For everyone to see --
    For everyone to know --
    For everyone to accept.
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    Re: Small dream.

    Do you want a baby with your loved one? o.O Sorry personal question! But thats what I thought you meant in the poem. Sorry if i'm totally wrong, otherwise great poem!!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Small dream.

    Actually that isn't what I ment, but sure I want baby with my love...
    I didn't ment the meaning behind it like that, but actually when I look poem
    better actually you get that kinda impression, which ain't bad ^_^

    No hard feelings about personal question, I like to answer them if they are "formal"
    and aren't insulting.

    <needs to look his own poems more closely...and not just write what I feel.


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    Re: Small dream.

    i will assume tht Tanja is ur loved one. U dream of having a family, to prove everyone tht they r wrong. So tht u 2 will lead a happy life but everyone is against u. good poem there.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Small dream.

    Blade, thats really close to the truth in real life. Thanks for comment


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    Re: Small dream.

    i have this freaky ability to be able tell wut the true meaning behind the words r. I consider it a good thing to be able to tell wut it means n make good friends at the same time.

    I can only hope n pray tht i will have the same joy when my love one comes over next october

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Small dream.

    u want a great family kids your love and to make people see u can do this if i am wrong sry

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    Re: Small dream.

    so you want a family good luck with that jk jk jk jk

    That was good keep it up

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