Awww.... this is really nice... I really like this poem. It's kinda dark, but at the same time- it has some kind of magical charm, made me feel dreamy even though the place you described isn't really bright and happy.
You have a spelling mistake in the 5th line- "tears" not "trears" Sorry- that word just made me really confused
I love how it seems to rhyme even though it does not... it's really kinda magical...Where in the darkness can our evil hide?
Is the light hidden deep within our mind?
And the last line is a great way to end this poem... Nothing else to say.... Nice work!!! And I hope to see more ^^